| "The Odd Night" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: SK On: September 17, 2005 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, the way the characters are speaking. It seems really flat.
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Title: ^^ kawaii
Reviewed By: wolfsbane_loner On: March 01, 2005 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ this is mondo kawaii. ^^ I'm a big fan of Schu/Omi (I know, not popular *sticks out tongue* and was kind of put down when there weren't any hints of Schu/Omi, but Nagi/Omi is just SO CUTE! ^^ I really don't care who wins Omi-chan as long as Omi-chan is happy~!!!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yami/Omi is good, though all the other choices, save the anyhikari/omi pairings are intriguing. write more soon please.
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Reviewed By: Ebony_Faye On: September 12, 2004 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really enjoy reading your story but each chapter is a little bit short. But aside from that, you're story is really quite fascinating. Okay for the pairings: Yami/Omi - This pairing is like Yami/Yugi (which I just love.) Yami/Seto - Cold steel heart melted by a sweet smile. (nice but not really into it. This thingy is like Ran/Omi. God, Omi's 16 for crying out loud) Bakura/Omi - Are you insane? This type will almost always result to rape. If not rape then abuse. And Omi does't deal well with abuse. Jou/Omi - I just don't see this pairing.. Yugi/Omi - Sweet + Sweet = Cavities. But nevertheless, quite good. Much like Omi/Omi. Okaaay, that was weird... Ryou/Omi - Can you spell "Saccharine"? Look at Yugi/Omi... Marik or Malik/Omi - Wow, a choice between a raging lunatic and a mindless idiot... DO THIS PAIRING! (grins, j/k) I vote for Yami/Omi! I agree with another reviewer, put a Nagi/Omi pairing here. Make Yami suffer!!! O~hhh! a Nagi/Yami showdown. (No, not a yami/nagi pairing XP)
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Title: ^-^ i wana vote!
Reviewed By: gackt anime gurl (aka weiss kreuz anime gurl) On: September 01, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ and as for the voting, can you also pick Weiss characters? if so i might pick Schu, you don't see much of those pairings, and if not, um...seto/omi i guess, it kind of reminds me of ran/omi. =^-^=
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
i vote.....err... Yugi/Yami/Omi! with maybe a little bit of Nagi/omi on the side?? why not eh??
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Reviewed By: Kearoru On: August 17, 2004 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah you added more! I vote JXO!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Stormyronin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omi/Yami please!! Will he find out about the yami's? Will they find out about him? Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Myu-Myu On: July 19, 2004 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kewl dont u just love shonen-ai couples but i dont want any couple cause i love them for straight but yugi and omi will look cute yami will be a bit serious u know what i mean.
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Title: Kearoru@aol.com
Reviewed By: Kearoru On: July 11, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, That was cute, actually made me laugh out loud at the library. Oops. Anyway, I vote for either Jounouchi X Omi, Marrik X Omi, or Seto Kaiba X Omi....wait, can I do that? Please keep it up and make sure to update soon. G'luck and G'bye!
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Reviewed By: tsukiya On: July 10, 2004 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Yami/Omi would make a good pair because it could be a sweet pairing like a Yami/Yuugi fic. But with Bakura/Omi pairing, a S&M twist could be put into it. Kind of like corrupting the innocense of Omi. *hint* *hint*
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