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| "Aoshi's Musings" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Welcome back!
Reviewed By: Firuze On: July 15, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hihi... My favorite part is about how he insist in fantasizing that the women he meets think of him as "well equipped". I mean, that's typically male, especially if the man in question is a little in the egocentric side as Aoshi is. The nurse/doctor fantasy is also very typical of men... hihi... I LOOOOOVED the part with the Kenshin plusie. What a lasting impression it surely left in poor, poor Aoshi-sama! No wonder he didn't need ice after it....* shudders* Hihi... he surely saw it during Jinchuu and his subconscious mind played a trick on him... I hope to see more of your writings soon. We missed you, and we need more Saitou good writing! *glomps* PS: and a bit of Nishi, pretty plese? *batting eyelashes*
| Reviewed By: kamorgana1 On: July 12, 2004 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back! And thanks for the laugh!!! Mr. Iceman ruining the ice merchant, priceless!!The Aoshi/Misao scene is hot and still humorous. And well, you-know-who is in the fic (I didn't find him OOC, BTW, and I agree with you on Aoshi), I'm happy, LOL. The end had me ROTFLMAO. I hope for the continuation of your other fics soon (^-^).
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