| "Silver-Haired Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Zirra On: October 04, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah. GREAT story,and i mean that you are agreat writter and i will definatly be reading the rest of your stories. please keep it up. heck im giving you a present, presenting one of each of the following in plushy form, Shesshomaru, Inuyasha, Kouga, and a grown up Shippou, whom i think will be dreamy, but even young he's cute as a butten. :D great story and i thank you for sharing it. ZIRRA
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Reviewed By: dt On: September 02, 2004 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IT WAS SO GOOD!!! WHATS THE SEQUEL GONNA BE NAMED??? CANT WAIT TO READ IT! NICE JOB! ^_^
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Title: frozenflarenotloggedoncauseitlogsherouteverytimeshetries
Reviewed By: FrozenFlare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 14:04 CDT
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I'm only on the 5th chapter so far but it is good thus far.. um ur oc seems a lil marry sueish but I'll keep reading ^^ You have good writing in this and inu's in character though cutely childish around her tee
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Reviewed By: *Somnambulicious* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I really am the real Somnambulicious...mm.org just won't let me stay logged in and review, for some weird reason.) Anyway, I have to tell you, this is one of the best fics I've ever read! You have a talent for writing humor, and that's very, very rare. I especially liked seeing Sesshoumaru's 'inner thoughts' as he storms around the mansion. Hilarious! Your plot was original, and I really enjoyed seeing the interactions between Kagome and Inuyasha's father. I'm glad you made him alive in this fic. Fics with such a prominent OC usually irk me, but you've done a great jot characterizing Kuroi. I can't wait to start reading the sequel, too! Keep up the good work!
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Title: prologue and chapter one review
Reviewed By: Kagome3007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 18:10 CDT
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I really liked the first two chapters. They were really interesting. Since I read the first half of the first chapter yesterday, and the second half today, I had forgotten that he'd left the house, so I was a bit confused when you were talking about him having been 'tracking his father' 'n' such. gotta go now, but great story so far! ^_^
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Title: blah
Reviewed By: XxX_pyro_XxX On: July 27, 2004 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story sucked
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:56 CDT
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Wonderful story!1I really enjoyed reading it^^
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