| "Purple Sunset" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Hi i like it
Reviewed By: Terry MAxwell On: July 12, 2004 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey... i hate 1xR and i totally love 1x2 but... your history is unique... and cautivates me... you will continue or maybe a sequel... it was a total enjoyable diferent point of view see ya
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 11, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
IT IS VERY GOOD BUT YOU SHOULD MAKE A STORY OUT OF IT. MAKE IT WHERE IT IS A TRUE 1X2. MAKE IT IN HEERO'S POINT OF VIEW AND HE LOVES DUO WITH ALL HIS HEART AND JUST LOVES RELINA LIKE A SISTER AND FIGURES OUT TO LATE. HE LOVES HER BECAUSE SHE REMINDS HIM OF THE LITTLE GIRL WITH THE PUPPY AND FLOWER SO MUCH. DUO HAS LEFT HIS JOB WITH HEERO AT THE PREVENTERS AND HEERO IS NOW TRYING TO FIND HIM. BUT DOES NOT FIND HIM TILL THREE YEARS LATER WHEN HE IS ON AN UNDERCOVER JOB AND DUO IS A SINGLE FATHER. HIS WIFE DIED OF CANCER AND SINCE SHE OWNED A MAJOR BUSINNESS HE IS NOW THE OWNER. PREVENTORS ARE INVESTIGATING A TERRORIST GROUP OF ONE OF THE THREE MAJOR COMPANIES IN THE UESN AND DUO'S BUSINESS IS AS LARGE AS THE WIN CORP. AND NO ONE KNOWS THAT HE IS THE OWNER. HEERO COULD GO TO HIS HOUSE AND HIS NAME IS NOW SOMETHING LIKE SOLO MAXIMILLIAN AND HIS DAUGHTER IS HELEN H.(HEERO - SECERET GODFATHER) MAXIMILLIAN. HEERO GOES TO THEIR HOUSE AND A LADY ANSWERES THE DOOR (THE NANNY) WITH THE LITTLE GIRL THAT LOOK JUST LIKE DUO. I WOULD LOVE TO READ A STORY LIKE THAT. DO YOU THINK THAT WOULD INTEREST YOU TO WRITE.
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