| "Blood and Amber" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: adb [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, put more K/K mush in. i.e. Kouru sits be Kinshins bedside while he gets better or more quite moments together.
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Reviewed By: Nette [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing! Suspense...drama...romance... Loving it!!! More please! Keep up the great work!
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Title: Freakin' Awesome
Reviewed By: Kenshin the hitokiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Really. Wow!!! I am loving this fanfic. You're one of my favorite writers so far! *adds you to favorites* UPDATE UPDATE!! UPDAAATTEE!! I was serprized when you told me no one had guessed the murder weapon imidiatley. I did. I remembered how Kenshin had left his sword, and the cops didn't find a murder weapon. My favorite part was probobly, hm... ((I loved the whole damn thing, actually)) My fave part was where Kenshin was just starting off with kicking-ass, and there was that gas chamber. Right around that part your style of writing really held my interest. If you could find it in your heart, check out my story so far. I'm not asking for a review, I'd just liked it if I got a few more visits. ^_^x Thanks. - Ryuken
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:50 CDT
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Ooooooook so I think you're gone by now... and I don't want to go back to school!! See I live in California... *and you didn't need to know that... hehe* Oh yes, I don't want to go back to school! O.o I just said that! Hem >.> please continue with the story! I really like it!!!!!!! no actually... I LOVE IT!!!!!!! mwahahahahaha >.< hehe oups... UPDATE!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:47 CDT
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Haha I knew it! I saw it coming although I didn't write it I don't know why... *scratches head* anyway I'm still going on with your story! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Ok I'm reviewing so you can update... but I'll have to finish reading the posted chapter first... I'll do that tomorow and I'll review some more... ^_~
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought there was something fishy about the number of reported deaths!! It's okay if the chief is OOC, he's a pain in the rear so it's nice to see him as a more ... helpless?... guy. Heehee. Anyway, you're leaving for camp soon, aren't you? I think that's what you put in one of your author notes... I'll have to recheck, but if you are, have fun! Looking forward to whenever you can next update!
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 19:53 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hmm...I've reveiwed about five times...Oh well!
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Title: ur fic ROCKS!!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is so great! i love it! oh, i'm still so sad that kenshin isn't, well, being more kenshin-like. anyway..i luv your fic, i really like it!! its so suspenseful!!
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Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was interesting, very suspensful. i liked it. another website that you can put your fic on is fanfiction.net. you did a very good job.
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 21:21 CDT
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GASP. REVEIW!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! I'm so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! My computer's been acting up on me lately but I was happily surprised to see another chapter up when my computer decided to be nice. Very interesting! It's a bit surprising to hear the men died of wounds to the heart, because I'm sure Kenshin only left them badly wounded, not instantly killed like that... except for the near beheading, of course. It'll be interesting to see Kenshin's actual thoughts on the matter later on. BTW, have fun in camp when you leave!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! I'm so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! My computer's been acting up on me lately but I was happily surprised to see another chapter up when my computer decided to be nice. Very interesting! It's a bit surprising to hear the men died of wounds to the heart, because I'm sure Kenshin only left them badly wounded, not instantly killed like that... except for the near beheading, of course. It'll be interesting to see Kenshin's actual thoughts on the matter later on. BTW, have fun in camp when you leave!!
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 11:38 CDT
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I like your story and have added it to my favorites. I hope that you will continue to write it, as I would love to read it to it's end. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Wow. That was fast. I haven't a clue as to the weapon thing, as I am an idiot. Eh, well, update soon.
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