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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! I'm so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! My computer's been acting up on me lately but I was happily surprised to see another chapter up when my computer decided to be nice. Very interesting! It's a bit surprising to hear the men died of wounds to the heart, because I'm sure Kenshin only left them badly wounded, not instantly killed like that... except for the near beheading, of course. It'll be interesting to see Kenshin's actual thoughts on the matter later on. BTW, have fun in camp when you leave!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! I'm so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! My computer's been acting up on me lately but I was happily surprised to see another chapter up when my computer decided to be nice. Very interesting! It's a bit surprising to hear the men died of wounds to the heart, because I'm sure Kenshin only left them badly wounded, not instantly killed like that... except for the near beheading, of course. It'll be interesting to see Kenshin's actual thoughts on the matter later on. BTW, have fun in camp when you leave!!
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 11:38 CDT
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I like your story and have added it to my favorites. I hope that you will continue to write it, as I would love to read it to it's end. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Wow. That was fast. I haven't a clue as to the weapon thing, as I am an idiot. Eh, well, update soon.
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 16:51 CDT
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Update son pwease :p
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Title: another great chapter!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 09:13 CDT
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Yay!! They held hands, how kawaii!! Sorry to hear about that deleted chapter, that's a horrible thing to have happen. Well, keep writing!! I'm looking forward to that plot twist! Your faithful reviewer, Kuroi.
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Title: another great chapter!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 09:13 CDT
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Yay!! They held hands, how kawaii!! Sorry to hear about that deleted chapter, that's a horrible thing to have happen. Well, keep writing!! I'm looking forward to that plot twist! Your faithful reviewer, Kuroi.
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 23:09 CDT
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UPDATE! THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL! PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE!
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 22:54 CDT
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GASP. I just finished reading chapter three and I'm all like "EWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" but ya warned me, so it's my fault. Great job. Your writint style is wonderful, and I love Kenhsin/Kaoru stories. Wonderful story plots. Ot's full of twists and turns and you're not afraid to make things go for the worst. Haha, I've written to much. Now I shall return to the rest of the story. ttyl
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Title: another great chapter!!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the ending to this chapter. I like how Kaoru encouraged him to carry her to the clinic, best thing to do!! Looking forward to more chapters, no matter how many or how long they are!
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Reviewed By: prophet04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 11:22 CDT
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IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLLLIKE IT!!!!!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Thanx for reviewing to my Rurouni Kenshin story! I decided after reading your reveiw to read it! It's awesome! And your right people should review!!! Love the story and ploT! ^_^
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Title: Amazing fic!!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I tried reviewing yesterday but I kept getting an "Information is missing" notice, which was weird because I had everything filled out. Anyway, what I was trying to say yesterday: This is an amazing fic! I love how you portray Kenshin's struggle with himself/Battousai. I can't wait to see how Kenshin and Kaoru are going to react when everything that's happened really settles in. Please update soon!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: sweetyfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kaoru!will she live?did the man kill her?Please post the next chapter soon!And i want to ask you how many chapters are you planing to write?
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Title: your fanfic....
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fan fic is great so far! its really suspensful!!! i think you have something great going here and would REALLY like it if u put a couple more chapters in! pleasey! i couldn't find anything wrong with it, not even spelling! more chapters please!
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