Title: YIKES!
Reviewed By: Ranko-Saotome On: May 25, 2005 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but this fic was really hard to read! Where is the formatting!? There is absolutely no formatting whatsoever. I tried really hard to read it but eventually I just gave up. If you could format and perhaps make it longer then I promise I'll try again. The idea shows great potential though!
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