Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: July 11, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
YES PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IS A GREAT STORY. MAKE WHERE DUO IS A DOCTOR AND HEERO AND RELINA GO TO GET MEDICATION SINCE HEERO CAN'T GET IT UP FOR HIS WIFE. THE DOCTOR PULLS HEERO ASIDE AND ASKS HIM QUESTIONS AND FIND OUT THAT HE IS GAY. THEY HAVE A ROMANTIC FLING AND HEERO DECIDES TO DIVORCE RELINA AND THEN MARRIES DUO IN THE END. BUT IT IS YOU STORY AND YOU CAN DO WHAT EVER YOU WANT. I JUST LOVE TO GIVE ADVICE FOR A LITTLE HELP SOMETIMES IT HELPS WHEN A AURTHOR GETS A BLOCK. LOVE THE BEGINING THOUGH.
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