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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 30, 2004 22:59 CDT
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Gondor? Not getting that by a Lord of the Rings fan hun. But that was a pretty good chapter. Nice cover with the wounds. *yawns* update soon okay? OH! OOC means "out of character" and Kawaii means "cute" in Japanese.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Its me I juss wanna know what a couple words mean...OOC...and Kawaii? I have no clue what they mean and if someone could tell me I would be much ablijized. And Thanks for reveiwing and IDK why Inuyasha had sex so soon but he heals fast lol. Plus Inuyasha had sorta a crush on her and well as for Kagome i dont blame her lol. Well if someone could answer my ?'s then that would be wonderful until the next chapter! lataz
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!Nice story so far!plz update soon^^
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 25, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Well that was quick...I'm a little surprised to see them end up together so easily. But it was a little over reaching to have Inuyasha get as hurt as you described and then have just regain the energy to have sex. And I don't believe Kagome would have done it with him after she just finished tending to his wounds and would run the risk of reopening said wounds. It's just my opinion of course but that chapter seemed ooc...
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: July 25, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just started reading & am enjoying the story. Hope Inuyasha here is a gentler & fluffy character when Kagome tells him about her father. Don't worry about the lemon if its tasteful its alright (I know U'll get better next round, is there a next lemon?). Hoping for a happy ending. Rooting for U.
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still Reading and I love it...nice lemon (hentai smirk)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 21, 2004 09:36 CDT
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That chapter was sweet! but *sigh* I always have bad news...Kagome doesn't have green eyes. In the anime she has brown and in the manga she has blue-gray so where did green come from??? But it was still a good chapter and now I wanna know what the fight club is. Please don't let it be what I think it is!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter keep up the good work can't wait until you update again
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Reviewed By: Sarcastic_nut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:40 CDT
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This is a really good fic. keep writting. and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 19, 2004 01:07 CDT
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I loved the new chapter but I think I should tell you that you posted chapter four twice. You might want to delete one of those...
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Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey keep up the good work and update soon can't wait to find out how inuyasha and kagome's living arrangement goes
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gr8 Story! plz continue!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good so far. Kagome's father and Naraku seem to be just alike. I found some missed spelled words, but nothing that can't be fixed with a little proof reading. I'm interested to see where you take this story.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Sabrina Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story it is very original and is good too keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 01:48 CDT
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hey great story so far!!! can't wait until you update which i hope is soon keep up the good work
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