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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 15:14 CST
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Title: COOOLLL!!!
Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The nine, well, I forgive ya. I get brain-stuck too.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: August 03, 2004 23:04 CDT
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Okay I couldn't even finish the last chapter when you started taking things form the movie "The Princess' Bride" and putting them in your story. Even though it was a small part, that is still plagiarism.And the name you took from LOTR in the last chapter. You may not see anything wrong with it, but I do.All of this tells me that you couldn't come up with your own plot and that you lack originality. You could have at least put up a disclaimer at the beginning fo the chapter or something, then it wouldn't have been plagiarism. It's just my opinion but hey those are my morals.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though you stole some stuff from the princess bride it was still great.
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Reviewed By: Level3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:17 CDT
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lol that is SO princess bride!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice!^^
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 30, 2004 22:59 CDT
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Gondor? Not getting that by a Lord of the Rings fan hun. But that was a pretty good chapter. Nice cover with the wounds. *yawns* update soon okay? OH! OOC means "out of character" and Kawaii means "cute" in Japanese.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Its me I juss wanna know what a couple words mean...OOC...and Kawaii? I have no clue what they mean and if someone could tell me I would be much ablijized. And Thanks for reveiwing and IDK why Inuyasha had sex so soon but he heals fast lol. Plus Inuyasha had sorta a crush on her and well as for Kagome i dont blame her lol. Well if someone could answer my ?'s then that would be wonderful until the next chapter! lataz
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!Nice story so far!plz update soon^^
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 25, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Well that was quick...I'm a little surprised to see them end up together so easily. But it was a little over reaching to have Inuyasha get as hurt as you described and then have just regain the energy to have sex. And I don't believe Kagome would have done it with him after she just finished tending to his wounds and would run the risk of reopening said wounds. It's just my opinion of course but that chapter seemed ooc...
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: July 25, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just started reading & am enjoying the story. Hope Inuyasha here is a gentler & fluffy character when Kagome tells him about her father. Don't worry about the lemon if its tasteful its alright (I know U'll get better next round, is there a next lemon?). Hoping for a happy ending. Rooting for U.
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still Reading and I love it...nice lemon (hentai smirk)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 21, 2004 09:36 CDT
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That chapter was sweet! but *sigh* I always have bad news...Kagome doesn't have green eyes. In the anime she has brown and in the manga she has blue-gray so where did green come from??? But it was still a good chapter and now I wanna know what the fight club is. Please don't let it be what I think it is!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter keep up the good work can't wait until you update again
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