| "Crossing Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: May 01, 2005 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
what happens next chapter? whats with Yami? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: crazy echo On: October 18, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's just not real enough. everyone is OOC. you seem to just want to bash the characters that you don't like and have sudden, random friendships pop up between characters that you do. the conflict Yami is having is about your only saving grace. and please don't let this one bad review stop you from writing. just try to develope a bit.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
so Harry/Draco? what does Ron think about this? plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
1. Isn't 'Merik' spelled Marik? Ok, 2. Draco/Harry yaoi! Please! 3. Your story sounds pretty cool. Kinda weird, but very good. Update soon please!
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