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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:22 CDT
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LOL!!! THAT WAS FUNNY!!! Did you get that from Totally Spies? XD That was funny!!! GREAT PLOT!!! I think that you should try to keep this story going for as long as possible! ^^ We all know you have to end it sometime, but let's put that off for as long as possible. //Kumori: NO!!!!! //Katie: Aww, shut up. By de way, kiune, meet my new alterego (XD ANOTHER!!) Kristal! I based her off of ya. ^^ She's my responsible side, and helps me control all my other alteregos! //Kristal: Katie, eat your carrots. //Katie: ¬_¬ But, sometimes I think she has a bit of my mom in her... //Kouen: OOH! OOH! I HAVE A QUESTION!!!! //Katie: Yes... //Kouen: =3 Doesn't everyone think I'm the coolest? //Kitty: ^.^ Mew! **snooooore** //Kumori: **crawling towards dresser** Under... wear... drawer... open... **snooooooooore** //Kit Kat: >.>
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Katie: T_T I ran out of room. I've always prided myself into fitting everythin I want to say into one review. Oh well. Ok, about the Kik/Nar pairing idea? If you think that ANYONE will barf reading that, don't do it. Some people really HAVE almost barfed from reading them. ^^ Just an idea, because I think that Kikyo is to be pitied AND hated, but mostly hated. I have to go, so ja ne!!!!! ^^ LOVED THE STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:00 CDT
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O.O You haven't read it?!?!?! Shoo, shoo!! Go read it!!! ^^ lol. I am not gonna force you to read it, but I also suggest her other stories- VERY GOOD!! ^^ I LOVE how this fic is shaping up. Personally, I probably like the Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha fighting over Kagome idea. Inu/San is just not my thing. (Not that I have anything against one- I've never even READ one!) I have another idea. **all of a sudden has a beard and the little hat thingy and robes** **folds hands up in robes and looks very wise** //Alteregos: -__-0 //Kilan: **hits Katie in the back of the head** //Katie: @_@ Lookit all the purty stars... //Konjou: I believe what Katie meant is she thinks that it would be wonderful if you did a Kik/Nar. //Katie: **stands up angrily** BAD ALTEREGOS! BAD!!! //Kumori: **flips Katie's skirt** //Katie: O.O VERY SICK, EVIL, TWISTED ALTEREGO!!! **to kiune** ^^0 And this is my new alterego, Kumori, the master of all sick and twisted things. -__- Let's just say she would be a perfect match for Miroku. //Kumori: ^^ He he he... I possesed Katie all day... //Katie: **sighs** DON'T remind me! I SWEAR I WILL TOSS YOU INTO THE TRASHCAN OF BAD IDEAS!!! I JUST KNOW I WILL!!!! //Kumori: You can't toss me anymore than you can Kitty. We're all a part of you. XP //Alteregos: O.o REALLY?! WAHOO!!! TIME TO POSSES!!! //Katie: **color drains from face** Oh, NO!! **runs like heck** BAD ALTEREGOS!! BAD BAD BAD!!! **points to characters which say... 48** I have to finish this up real quick and oh NO |
Title: oh, i forgot!
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i noe, i forgot something. I say u hav a part where Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are about to fight Naraku, and Inuyasha says some wise-crack thing, and they start to fight. That would be hilarius (sp?)!!!! just thought that would be funy. huggles!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it! I was surfi' threw the fics, and this was incredibly written! did u no, the healer looks almost EXACTLY like my character, and my OC is a healer too! ^__^ thats like sooo awesome!kutgw!!(keep up the good work!!!) huggles, Kuzume
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Title: NO I+S but its your story
Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:54 CDT
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I'm juts getting use to Sess and Kag now you are throwing Inu and San at me, what is this world coming to. update soon.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: sessy/narakulover911 On: October 01, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappy. i am havin trouble uploading my story to the website so it may be a while till i figure it out or someone helps me. anyways... nice story and lookin forward to the next chapter. update again soon. :) (gatta luv the hot and steamy moments with sessy and kag). great story.
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Reviewed By: christinatails (forgot to login) On: October 01, 2004 15:57 CDT
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And it's great to be back! *sighs* Right now I've got some Ds in three of my classes, but let's not worry about that! We should be worrying a bout Kagome being kidnapped by Naraku! YOU BETTER SAVE HER SESSHOUMARU! OR YOU'LL PAY FOR NOT RESCUEING MY HALF SISTER WITH ME FOREVER ANNOYING YOU! Please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 10:43 CDT
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! IT ERASED MY REVIEW AGAIN!!!! I had used 1400 of the 1500 characters... T_T And I can't write it again. Oh well. Here were the important parts: I have a friend who has a username, it's peachgirl, and I was wondering, if you could, maybe... Read and review her story called 'Disco Party Sleepover'? It's really good. Here is a quote: //Kouen: I FOUND THE KILLER! tHE KILLERS IN THAT CORNER! //everyone: *looks at corner* //Kouen: NO YOU BAKAS THE OTHER-- //Sary: Jeez... If she just told us who did it instead of where they are. //Sarasa: *looks in corners* Kouen. Nobody's. There. //Shane: *uses powers to see in the dark* You won't like what I'm about to tell you but... //Faia: But what? //Shane: Kouen is dead. //END OF QUOTE. XD I laughed really hard when I read that. of course, Kouen was me, but I didn't care cause I know my friend and I knew that I would come back! ^.^ So.... Ya. That story has a lot of reviews, but most are by me... So I'm trying to get as many people as possible to read and review it! I have to go now, so Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 10:36 CDT
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AN UPDATE!!!!! ^^ YAY!!!! **throws confetti and some balloons** 0>.>
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Title: it's great
Reviewed By: sessy/narnakulover911 On: September 25, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great. i can't wait to hear more from you. i am currently registered to media miner and am starting to write my own fic about inuyasha. it's called in the light of the moon. i would really like it if you read it and told me wat u think. seeing as u are really good at this stuff i could really use ur advice. thanks bye seesy/narakulover911
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Title: This story ROX my SOX
Reviewed By: Sessy/narakulover911 On: September 25, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP THIS STORY IS THE BOMB... YOU SERIVOUSLY THOUGH SHOULD TRY WRITING AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE. LIKE WITH KAGOME HAS A JOB WHERE SHE HAS TO TRACK DOWN A NATORIOUS CRIMINAL. AND GET CLOSE TO HIM SO SHE CAN GET INFO. ABOUT WHERE HIS NEXT CRIME WILL BE COMITIED. BUT LIKE WHEN IT COMES TIME TO TURN HIM IN TO THE GOV. SHE CAN'T BECAUSE. SHE FEEL IN LOVE WITH HIM AND HIM WITH HER. BUT HE DOSEN'T KNOW SHE ALMOST BETRYED HIM AND WHEN HE DOES... WILL HE TAKE HER BACK? ( YAY... THATS A STORY)+ U COULD PUT NARAKU IN IT CAUSE POOR GUY DON'T GET MUCH PLAY. WELL BYE FOR NOW AND HOPE TO HEAR FROM YEA SOON. LUVE LOTS --- SESSY/NARAKULOVER911 ;~)
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Reviewed By: christinatails (forgot to login) On: September 23, 2004 15:34 CDT
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*crying* I'M SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING AND ALL! I'VE BEEN SO BUSY WITH HIGH SCHOOL AND DRAMA CLUB AND CHOIR, AND ONE OF MY COUSINS DIED! *continues crying* PLEASE FORGIVE ME! *cries some more*
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 07:09 CDT
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I like this story...really...I just have a couple of things to point out, constructively! Spell checking would be nice (granted, I can read typoese, but straight English is easier) and in humans, menses is actually the opposite of "being in heat" (human's estres [the time of being in heat] is hidden, unlike other animals...but I digress). Anyway, over all, I think it's a good story, but could use a little refining :D
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:48 CDT
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aerkyn: Go flame someone elses story! XP kiune: YA! ^^ I really hate flamers. BUT... That was a really good chapter. I LIKED IT A WHOLE LOT!!! It was one of my fav chps!!! Ig nore the flamers. If they don't go away... ^.~ Play with fire and ya might get burnt! **tears up** And I didn't know my reviews meant that much to you... Anyway, I have to go, so ja ne!
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