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Reviewed By: aerkyn On: September 21, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't read this for all the bad spelling and missed words. Use a spellcheker for goodness sake, I don't care how young you are. If you know how to upload, you can certainly care enough about your work to make it presentable.
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 16:35 CDT
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WHY DID IT ERASE ALL THAT I HAD WRITTEN???? WHY???????????? **sigh** I had a good long review... T_T Oh well.. The only really important part that was lost was a question: Can I use the whole 'going into heat' thing in one of my fanfics? Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 16:34 CDT
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Ummm... It is Inu/San pairing, isn't it? Am I right? **looks around to find someone to answer her question** >.>
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Reviewed By: Baka KitsuneBri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:40 CDT
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yo! good, i think a sango/inu pairing would be cool, i seldom read them, or even see them, but then miroku wouldnt have some1 to be paired with, but whatever....update soon please
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Oh, and BTW, I actually don't mind Inu/San pairings. ^.~
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 17:38 CDT
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**pales** It's a Inu/San pairing, isn't it? IT'S AN INU/SAN PAIRING!!!! NUUUUUUUUU!!!! And Miroku is hitting on a girl, as usual... Maybe this time he's acutally found someone, what with Sango cheating on him. (Shhh! It's supposed to be a scret- right?) ... Not muc to say again. School's a pain, did you know that? And I'm glad that you found enough time in your *very* busy schedule to update before Sunday! Or have I lost track of time again...?
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:03 CDT
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Hmmm... I was hoping that Inuyasha would folow... But the chapter was still great!!!! ^^ And happy birthday to you! I don't really hae much to say... **yawns** Mirokus Gurl10 (my friend) slept over at my house last night and peachgirl (another friend) came into town. ^^ I can't wait for next weeks chapter. **stares ahead and does nothing but wait**
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 19:13 CDT
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**smacks Inuyasha** Bah. Nope, he didn't help me out. Sesshoumaru did. **death glare at Inuyasha, then smiles sweetly at Sesshoumaru** PLEASE update soon!!!!! ^^ I really can't wait until Inuyasha finds out that Kagome is there of her own free will. ^^ lol PLZ let that be next chapter. Oh, and I can't remember... Is it THIS story that already has an editor, or am I thinking of a different story....? If I am right, and this story has no editor... can I be one??? Please?? Cuz, no offene, but I noticed several spelling and grammar errors in that chapter. ^^ Consider it! (If you don't already have an editor.)
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Reviewed By: christinatails (forgot to login) On: August 31, 2004 16:23 CDT
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I'M BACK! *sighs* I have to go to High School again! Which is why I haven't been here for a while! *points at large pile of homework* That was so funny with InuYasha stuck in the ground! Good thing I took a picture before Miroku took off the scrolls! *smiles and gives you some* Something to blackmail InuYasha with! Please update soon! Buh-bye for now! Now to go on a date with Tails! ^___________^
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 18:14 CDT
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YES!!! NEW CHAPPY!!! NEW CHAPPY!!!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! **runs in circles until she bores a hole into the ground** **looks up** Uhhh... A little help here?? Inuyasha? Can you here me? A little help??? Your very good at getting out of holes... Please?
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Reviewed By: Baka KitsuneBri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 13:40 CDT
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this is good, but you should have shippo follow sess after the battle, to go to kagome, its just a suggestion though, update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 12:53 CDT
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*blushes* AWWWW, your welcome. anywayz, PLZ update soon!! i want to know what happens really badly. but then again, suspense is always a good thing!!!!! ja ne, Tsuki-chan
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 16:35 CDT
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Awww... Don't apologize for me confusing myself. ^^ Just something that happens in my everyday life! Here's a phrase that really caught me off guard and confused me: "Nobody calls me nobody except for nobody you nobodies!" @_@ I read it in a review for the Yu-Gi-Oh! movie. **scratches head** I make you laugh? Really? Coolness! ^^ I guess I just don't see myself that way... Anyway, LOVE the update!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Inuyasha and Sesshy meet. lol lol lol I'm laughing just thinking about it. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 10:41 CDT
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HHHEEEELLLLLLLOOOOOOO!!!!!!! sorry i have not reviewed for a while, i was busy. anywayz, i wonder what will happen when Inu reaches Fluffys castle. Wait...CHANGE THE FUTURE!?!?! *takes cover in bomb shelter*. *whispers* well, update really really soon! ja ne, Tsuki-chan
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:53 CDT
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^^ I just LOVE it when people thank the reviewers!!!! ^^ Call me crazy, but I just like it. It makes me feel fuzzy inside. Wait, that sounds wrong. @_@ How come every time that I write a review for this story, I always confuse myself? PLEEEEAAAAAASE update soon!!!! Ja ne! -Katie and all her alteregos
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