| "The Untouched Life Of My Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: KialuvsKai On: October 01, 2005 03:47 CDT
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not to mention u should put the whole part were both kai and kalayne remember what happened the day kalayne betrayed him... well kinda like a flashback....
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Reviewed By: KialuvsKai On: September 26, 2005 04:42 CDT
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ooo...u should continue the story is so good yet it seems so unfinished...after all it's hard to find good fanfics that contaun an OC... please finish the story. i want to know what happens to Kai and Kalayne next and i thought u said that everyone else was going to find about wat those 2 did that night... well please finish your a very talented writer...
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