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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 18, 2004 20:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really cool keep going.
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 18, 2004 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yes it's going to get good now that vegeta bonded to her(well sort of)and thank for your comments.yes i did read your other story so i'll be keeping i eye out for updates ok..maria.
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Reviewed By: amandajune1645 On: July 15, 2004 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love It.
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah thats cruel of you to leave a cliffhander like that..please update soon....you know i've readed stories like this already and it always ends with vegeta saving her and yamcha getting killed so lets see if you can do something different with this...can't wait to read and find out...maria
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