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Title: Omg!!
Reviewed By: emxdeezy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2015 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your chapters are shorter than what I'm used to but you write very
well!! A few grammar errors here n there but not to where it could
confuse readers. Pity I'm reading this and it is 2015 and a little
over 7 years late but I hope someday you'll finish this story!! The
lemon needs to be squeeeeezeddd!!!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 01:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa.. its been too long since I read this fic. I don't even remember whats going on. o_o I'm going to have to re-read it once the lemon comes up so I can understand whats going on.
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Reviewed By: trunksgirl@.@ On: February 01, 2006 19:11 EST
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*crying*WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENS NEXT! UP DATE SOON FOR THE LOVE OF GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: (maccam) On: October 28, 2005 18:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh how i wish vegeta had this revenge for i know it would be lots of blood and gore. wow bulma killed someone. and why is she being difficult with vegeta???? update soon ok :)
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Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoohhh Goku being dark, creepy. Jsut a question, where's Gohan during all this. He's awfully smart and while maybe nto knowing what he would notice something being up, really his dad is pissed. Love the fic though, glad to see the update.
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: September 19, 2005 02:52 EDT
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I am so happy you updated. I am loving this story and I can't wait to see what happens to Yamcha in the next chapter.
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 17:16 EDT
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YES your back.i'm so sorry to hear about your personal life and whats going on but i'm also glad that your back on track *HUG* anyway please keep writing. I want to know why did bulma react that way, and isn't she and vegeta bonded.please update i could find out whats going on...
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: April 03, 2005 19:44 EDT
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Thank you so much for finally updating!! I love the premise of getting Yamacha back for what he did, but I was wondering why you haven't described the new relationship between Bulma and Vegeta? We know they're married now but there's really no info on how well that's going or if they even trust each other. No matter which direction this goes I'll check back for more updates!!
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:04 EST
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OMG that was great. i've missed this story and i'm glad your writng again..how was the honeymoon. hope everything *went well*..anyway i can't wait for the next chapter. oh vegeta abd bulma are great together in this story..are they ever going to be together as husband and wife. and does bulma know that they are BONDED....please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: 9849651 On: January 31, 2005 22:15 EST
Comment/Review:
great so far.... please update
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: mlf On: January 19, 2005 10:59 EST
Comment/Review:
ok i'm waiting to read whats going to happen next...and what is vegeta going to do about his new wife...or for that yamcha..be safe on your honeymonon and update when you get back ok...maria
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Reviewed By: MPD Psycho On: August 28, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I don't mean to be harsh, a little more substance in each chapter would be good. Also, try to cut down on grammar mistakes. It seems like your story is choppy and it doesn't flow quite well. The plot is developing well, it's nice to see Yamcha as someone other than 'the weakling.' Although he is a rapist and an attempted murderer.
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 28, 2004 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sweet... i hope ur wedding is joyful... and i hope u two will stay together for a long ass time... lol... and i hope that u update when u have time... take ur time!!! ..\/, =^_________^=
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Title: Bonding
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 28, 2004 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wpw congrats om the wedding.hope it went well.get chapter to.i thought you forgot this story.poor bulma not where i would want to be.i only hope that vegeta will get the truth and help her...please update soon...(well after the honeymoon)...lol maria
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Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice just keep your word on it bieng different because oriinality is bliss.
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