| "From Heaven & Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: *shinigami* On: July 20, 2004 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good!!^_^!!hmmm..please ..if u cuold..put it in more detaile..thanks!!^_'!! other than that it very good!!hehe!! please update soon!! cant wait till chappie 4!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 14, 2004 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, so far from what i have read i liked and please write some more so that we can see what happens. oh yeah you should also put more detail in to the story.
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Reviewed By: nekoi1999 On: July 13, 2004 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi i justw an to tell u that your story is good there is a good lot and it could became quite interesting but i think that your writhing is a bit rush what I mean is it mist description like boom the batlle start and five second later the battle is over or you could describe people and place to it will help to the ambiancee but he that my point of vue abd i do want u to continue writting cause i want to lnow what going to happen. so continu the good work nekoi
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