| "High Summer" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: bffimagine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Um, watch the homophones in your story, like their and there, waste and waist...
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Title: Very good... but
Reviewed By: fairykayzee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this was really cute, and i LOVED it.. but I was kinda wondering, what about Ginji?? He stopped Ban from finishing, then he finished Ban off... and then they cuddled,I loved it.. but shouldnt Ginji get what he deserves ;)???lol But other than that this was really cute...
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Reviewed By: gwahcola [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a very cute, short lemon. I'm not sure I'd be distracted if it was THAT hot, but still, very cute! (Ooh, I'm so glad it's winter...) The only thing I really have to complain about is to watch your double meanings. That is, "waste" verses "waist" and "there/their/they're". There were a couple of times when you might've missed them in the proofing. ^^ Other than that, I think your character portrayal wasn't bad, and Ginji struck me as really funny being so forward! Nice job, ^_^ And for the record, the beginning line about Tokyo filled with sweaty salary men was a beautiful line. Haha...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweetness....The ficcy was coolies... X3 (Yay! More BanXGinji!!!) *Does happy dance* Do some more maybe, okies?? =3
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Reviewed By: Tamababys baby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good! Shounen ai!
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Reviewed By: SKF13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do they ever get to the beach? Or has Ginji forgotten about the ice cream? *snicker*
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