| "Nabiki Reborn = Rewrite" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: dragon_game On: July 21, 2005 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. Please continue it soon.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kicks ass. I like the idea. Can't wait to see where it is going.
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Reviewed By: LordThom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly I have to say I liked the original better, mostly because the pacing seemed more natural and Ranma was closer to cannon, but still... I liked this a lot too!.. Please continue with this story
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: July 31, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy to see that you have continued this.
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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. I read through the original, and liked it. This is better by far, even though it is not as far along as the original was. Isn't Setsuna a Sailor Moon character? I can understand using her somewhat. When will the next chapter be out? Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: July 14, 2004 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
i saw this story a while back, im glad your working on it again. see you next update.
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Reviewed By: an author On: July 13, 2004 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok... this is not going to be pretty. but here it is. one you need to write in PAST tense writing prose. frankly the shifting back and forth of present tense and past tense makes it confusing. only time you should even bother using present tense writing prose is when someone is thinking or speaking. secondly you need to split your paragraphs up more. when nabiki is speaking give her her own paragraph or line. then separate someone elses speech and thinking into another paragraph. finally RYOGA'S last name is not spelt HABIKI it is spelt HIBIKI. please get that right.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah dang man, I am so glad to see this fic HERE thank you! I hope this will not Collect Dustbunnies Looking forward to more Shadow Megatron
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