| "Young Man's Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Other than your not liking Gohan, I love this story. A definite must read for anyone who has ever seen DBZ. I was wondering if you could do me a big favor and review some of my writings. I could use some reviews and tis from a good fiction writer like you. Anything would just be great.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Darn MM hasn't been sending me update notices. *whines* I just thought to check today and saw you had updated! I am loving this new stuff. Vegeta helping Gohan out... he would kinda understand not liking your life wouldn't he. But of course they both dealt with it differently. I have always been a fan of angst and you write the interal struggle very well. Thank you so much for keeping writting. ^_^ I will check back more offten since clearly MM is acting up again. Keep up the great work!
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Title: This is great!
Reviewed By: KittyHorse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 21:51 CST
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To tell you the truth, I don't even really watch DBZ. I used to watch it sometimes when I was younger. Anyway, although I'm not much of a DBZ fan, I must admit, this story is GREAT! I felt that the way you portrayed Gohan made it seem like people could relate to his troubles. Keep it up! I hope you get a lot of reviews, because you deserve it!
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Reviewed By: serene On: September 09, 2004 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I have to wonder why you don't have more reviews. Gohan is my fav character anyway. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 01:57 CDT
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This fic is very very diiferent and well, I think I like it! ^.^ but then .. I am a bit twisted. Yush I am going to add this to my fav.s list, please go ahead and update soon. **sits back and ponders** Gohan a pain med junkie..... who would have thought *chuckles* yeah, I like it. *smirks*
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