| "A Simple Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLZ the ending was GUREAT!
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Reviewed By: Aila On: April 02, 2005 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fic, it's my current favorite. I havent read any of your other fanfics yet, but I fell safe saying this could be your best. ^_^
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Reviewed By: big trouble On: January 09, 2005 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow this might be the best ranma fic I ever but you probaly should have left the Harry Potter thing out it kind of messed up the ending
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Reviewed By: baby CHANEL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed the story up until the last chapter. I sort of felt like you just threw everything together just to end the story. There were grammar/spelling errors and it was sort of choppy. But except for that chapter, I really liked your story! Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to read anymore of your stories! (This is constructive criticism so don't be too offended) =)
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Reviewed By: WehrWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 15:56 CST
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Great chapter! Ich hoffe, dass dies nicht Ihr letzten ist ^_^ As for the lemon bit, I dont think you should.. Wouldant fit in with the story, Least that's what I think
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Reviewed By: bladeluster0 On: December 04, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a good story. that's it, period.
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Reviewed By: WehrWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style ^_^ Cant wait to see where this goes. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Robert Delaney On: November 30, 2004 07:51 CST
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Someone's having a little too much fun. I'm just waiting for Ranma to realize what happened.
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Reviewed By: Jaded_Shrew [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 02:10 CST
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great chapter dude!! i'd wirte more about it, but it's 3:10 Am and i'm a little sleepy, lol -- but i can't wait for the next chapter -- so get it out soon!!
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Reviewed By: Jaded Shrew On: November 05, 2004 10:18 CST
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this was a great chapter dude -- i love Fate and Caose...am i spelling that correctly? anyway, i'm so loveing this story, so update soon!
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Title: Like it
Reviewed By: dana-san On: November 03, 2004 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rather like this take on the story - Ranma understanding Ryouga. Bizarre but reasonable.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH.....I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!! I like this story, it sounds like it's gonna be really interesting so far! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: October 08, 2004 22:53 CDT
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Reviewing here since ff,net won't accept anonymous reviews. Okay, so Ranma is regretting his wish. That's reaasonable, maybe his pride and ego prevented him from taking the wish back when he had the chance, although this would have been more reasonable if he had been challenged about his wish. He's now in a far worse situation since he still has engagement problems except with the one he seems to want. That can be overcome as he would have had to break some honor engagements in his previous life as well. What makes matters worse is that Akane would have to break an engagement, and that engagement seems to be with someone she cares about. It will be a struggle to get these two together without a lot of problems.
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Reviewed By: beanking On: October 05, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O yea i forgot to rate.
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Reviewed By: beanking On: October 05, 2004 11:15 CDT
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It 's a different take on the Ranma get's a wish. 1) He hasn't been born as a girl. 2) He's not stuck as a gilr. 3) He hasn't been cured etheir. Keep it up ^_^
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Reviewed By: babi blu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. please continue this fic! i look forward to your next update, and please make it as soon as possible! ja
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Title: WHEN??WHEN??
Reviewed By: are_en On: August 30, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATED THE STORY??? Uhuhuhuh I like it SO much and hope you continue it soon.Please e-mail me if you do updated it ok Jya ne ^_-
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Reviewed By: anss On: August 28, 2004 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryoga in Ranma's position... I will be keeping my eye on tih fic.
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Reviewed By: Jaded_shrew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 23:42 CDT
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this is a really cute story dude! i really hope you update it soon! lol, i have a feeling Ranma is soon going to regret his hastily made wish -- also very interested to see how you play the P-chan bit, lol ^.^ update soon or i'm gonna cry -- aky?
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Reviewed By: AJ-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like your idea for this fic. I'm really a Ranma/Akane fan, but I also like Ryouga/Akane. I really enjoyed reading your fic and I hope to read more soon! Good luck with your writing! =)
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This will indeed be interesting, I just hope Ranma is not STUPID enough to want Akane back, I mean fer petes sake he gets his wish granted, it would be monumentally naieve and selfish of him if he does indeed gloss over the bad things just for the sake of getting a jealous little girl like Akane back . Not to mention that it would indeed tick of Lady Fate sdhould Ranma be so condriditory and stupid, she may take it upon herself to make sure ranma was never even conceived ! All in all a good start to this fiction Shadow Megatron.
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