| "Nibunnoichi! GXP!" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Hello
Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was interesting. Actually, all your stories are. Your style of writing is great too, I just love it. The problem is that the update rate is, sort of. erratic and some of the stories seem to be forgotten, which is a great shame. Seems like you are planning a RxM+U x-over. Maybe not... At any rate, so far I greatly enjoyed this story and hope to see the continuation.... some day... maybe even this year...(people are allowed to dream, ne ^_^)
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Reviewed By: goldforce10 On: April 06, 2005 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heck yes! Please keep writing this story, I want to see what you have planned for Ranma in the GP. With both Urd and Mara after him, it should be an interesting read.
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Reviewed By: too soon again On: March 18, 2005 06:12 CST
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I thought my review had not been posted and reentered it. I want to apologize to you for that. It occured that Ranma's curse could come in handy for undercover work. I'll be checking back for updates and hope to see a continuation soon.
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Reviewed By: Too soon to tell On: March 17, 2005 21:41 CST
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It really is too early to rate this story. I think sometimes that there is a competition among Akane bashers to see who can be more vicious. You were kind in comparison. Many so called Ranma fans are getting ever more nasty in their stories. Some characters are trashed and bashed until they are unrecognizable. Some people just want Tenchi killed off so that Ranma can have his life and family. Now, I fear the same thing will be happening to Seina Yamada. I really don't think you should try to fix Ranma up with a married woman, as some have suggested, or someone who might be engaged like Tsunami. If you want someone for Ranma other than Urd or Mara, an original character would be better. Having Ranma join the Galaxy Police could be interesting if you do an original story. That is something that is sorely laking in all too many fics. The humor and fun that is so much a part of the manga is becoming rare. Too many people have forgotten why the became fans in the first place. Ranma too has all but disappeared in many crossover stories. Just how much can Ranma be changed and still be called Ranma?
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Reviewed By: too soon to tell On: March 16, 2005 21:18 CST
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It really is too early to rate this story. I think sometimes that there is a competition among Akane bashers to see who can be more vicious. You were kind in comparison. Many so called Ranma fans are getting ever more nasty in their stories. Some characters are trashed and bashed until they are unrecognizable. Some people just want Tenchi killed off so that Ranma can have his life and family. Now, I fear the same thing will be happening to Seina Yamada. I really don't think you should try to fix Ranma up with a married woman, as some have suggested, or someone who might be engaged like Tsunami. If you want someone for Ranma other than Urd or Mara, an original character would be better. Having Ranma join the Galaxy Police could be interesting if you do an original story. That is something that is sorely laking in all too many fics. The humor and fun that is so much a part of the manga is becoming rare. Too many people have forgotten why the became fans in the first place. Ranma too has all but disappeared in many crossover stories. Just how much can Ranma be changed and still be called Ranma?
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Reviewed By: A Reader On: March 12, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this could be an interesting story if it's not just another Ranma gets Jurai power or matchmaking story. Those things have been done so often that they're getting downright boring. Giving Ranma the powers of a god or wizard or all the other crossover powers is also getting tired and predictable. It could make this story more if you involved Tenchi and the rest of his family. Maybe Airi could have them visit? Involving Seina Yamada and his wives could make this story very funny.
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Reviewed By: HappyPig [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter! I had almost given up hope :) Good on you! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lots of ways you can go from here. it'll be interesting to see what you have planed
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Reviewed By: Jason Hakala On: October 31, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are four women after Seina in the original give Ranma more like say the original four plus these(Tsunami, Hild, Mara, and Urd) and make it more exciting and longer next please.
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Reviewed By: HappyPig [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fic hope you keep on writing it.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 21, 2004 15:16 CDT
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I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 12:22 CDT
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Ranma in the Galaxy Police? Oh boy, is he ever gonna get it. I would like to see this Idea played out, though I am a wee bit over enthusiastic about it. And I say use the normal people, and your own. What is the piont of placing Ranma in the largest police force, if he only meets people from the Tenchi cast??? Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: Kazami On: July 14, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Very interesting, please continue it, and i would like it if you use the canon GXP characters, if you do decide to do a romance, would you conisder Ranma/Amane or Ranma/Ryoko Balta? Heck try one with Ranma and Lady Seto, that's be intresting XP. Can't wait to read more. This review has been brought to you by your friendly neighborhood mentally-unstable white boy: Kazami
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Reviewed By: an author On: July 14, 2004 20:16 CDT
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well i would like you to use characters from tenchi muyo. also i would like to see a matchup with kiyone and ranma if possible. anyhow also i would also like to see you write more on your other fics. later.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: July 14, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Looks like this will be a great fic. I hope you decide to write more.
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