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Reviewed By: XxxDaveySoSexy10 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought you did really good on this story. i hope you continue and tell wether or not inuyasha kicks hojos ass or not; )
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 05:17 CST
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This is a really cute story. I can't wait to see what happens with the "mystery guy". I hope you update soon. I also love the outtakes you do at the end of the chapter. I think they are hilarious! My roommate doesn't think so though when I bust out laughing at 2 am though. She just doesn't understand the hilarity.
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Reviewed By: xxstarry_dreamzxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 20:26 CST
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its really really good! yeh and the out takes are really funny..^^ update asap~
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, this is one interesting fic, really good stuff here, updates soon, okay?
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Reviewed By: SKEEZO On: November 06, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GOOD BUT YOU NEED TO UPDATE MORE AND FASTER PLEASE AND THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 07:46 CDT
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This is really good, and you've got me eagerly awaiting the next update~ Zonza
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Title: nice job
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: July 19, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. i really like it a lot. i hope u have a safe flight to florida. i dont want the plane to crash soo im reviewing. oh and plz dont forget about this story! i hate it when authors do that! its soo annoying. heh. well anyway, update asap!
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Reviewed By: animedreamer On: July 17, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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update! update! update! update! update! update! UPDATE PLEEEEEEEAZZZZZZZE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter too much Sango and Miroku but like you said there will be one only For Kag and Yash so im happy lol OOh have a fun time in Florida its awesome down there you'll have so much fun !! lol Cant wait until you come out with the next !!!
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Reviewed By: Zhare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 04:27 CDT
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I would suggest consolidating your review responses. Instead of writing individual responses, just list the names of your reviewers in a general thank you. Unless, of course, if someone has a question or something like that, which would require an individual response. Other then your really long responses, something too many writers do, I really liked your story, the out takes were very funny and I hope you continue them. I look forward to your next chapter. Ja ne. ~Zhare~
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha i feel so special being the first one to review !! lol yay !! ^.^ haha update soon !! Its getting sooo good !!
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Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: July 15, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a little choppy, but a good idea overall. I'd like to see what happens, so hurry up and finish. i can't stand unfinished fanfiction
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good !!! the chapters need to be longer but its still good anyway update soon !!!
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