| "Nothing More Than Fiction" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Julia!~!
Reviewed By: Hehe, me again. Sorry > On: February 19, 2005 00:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Ehh. Yeah. Faye? She helped Julia, as did Julia with Faye. Faye actually LIKES Julia. I really, seriously, SERIOUSLY doubt she'd call Julia a whore. Please try to keep some things in line, at elast the actual story line :/
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Reviewed By: Julia!~! On: February 19, 2005 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like Julia, but you have your facts wrong. Julia actually died trying to help Spike, yeah, and she stayed with the sindicate becasue she didn't have a choice- SPIKE chose his freedom over Julia and left her.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good. I think Faye is a bit OOC, but only because I see her as being more aggressive - take what she wants without hesatation. I also think she'd be wearing less in a dance club - she's Faye after all. The only thing that tossed me completely was how Spike got the room that Faye was already in? Something there could have been explained I think. Over all I think it was good.
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