"A Worse Punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 11:36 EST Comment/Review: ... I can´t understand this christian version of vegeta angels... demons.. i am not sure if i like it or not. too much soft it´s like a sweet pain... |
Reviewed By: keyKi On: December 11, 2004 13:30 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have say this was really good!!! I hope you make a seqeul.
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 12:31 EST Comment/Review: I really liked your story. very original. too bad you ended so soon. I hope you make a sequel.
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Title: Ch 4 Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 15:11 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I like this story! It's intriguing and cute! I can't wait to read more of it. =)
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 16:10 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehe. I really like this one. *excited* So? Whats gonna happen. *jumps up and down* Come on! Update! *puppy dog eyes* Pwease update? Pwease?
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: July 17, 2004 13:41 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A really promising start ^_^ This is a cool idea, very original and I can't wait to see where you take your readers with it. Happy writing and please update soon (not that I'm one to talk >_
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