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| "The Prince and the Sorceress" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Behind Closed Doors?
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2012 11:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't find it! when are you going to make that one-shot? i realy like this story! | Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fic. In fact I've read several of your other fics recently and I've enjoyed every one. I plan to read the rest. I understand the difficulty in updating. I don't know it myself but I understand. No rush (you know, of course, when someone says this that they don't actaully mean it; it's just more polite than the alternative). Also, if you would like a proof reader (or another one as the case may be, I don't know) then please feel free to contact me. I would be pleased to help. I like your work and think that it would help. From the offices of AMWOOD co
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: LunaticoPandora On: April 19, 2006 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why nobody writes reveiws!! I love this story and just recently discovered it again! I plan to read it a few more times over before I move onto something else.
| Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 06:08 EDT
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furri curri that waz awesome!!! i like story very much.
| Title: sakuraforce2
Reviewed By: sakuraforce2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This is your friendly fanfic stalker, sakuraforce2. Couple of things: I'm sorry you got deleted off of ff.net, but please don't erase your member profile. I don't know my way around mediaminer very well, and it's so much easier for me to just click on that link. Second, Akane the Dominatrix seems to be dying off, and I'd like you to know that while it is somewhat funny and awfully lemony, maybe you need to sort out the plot a little bit. As it is right now, I could only imagine one or two more chapters, and all they would be is a lemon that you've been leading up to all along. May I ask, why do you bother to keep The Prince and the Sorceress clean if it's no longer on ff.net? I thought the entire time it was there, it was kept pg-13 so as to not risk removal, but you removed it yourself, so I'm not quite sure I see the big deal. Although when you mentioned Behind Closed Doors, you sure seemed like you had already made up your mind, so maybe you have a reason for doing this, so I'll shut up. Also, just a simple question here, how many more chapters on Vegeta's Tail do you expect? I'm not sick of it or anything, lord no, but it seems to be ending in a very final way, ya know? Now, on to this chapter, I think it's great that Vegeta's finally making a move. I've never thought that he was one to wait patiently, and actions do speak louder than words. Poor Bulma though, after this night of...wrestling with Vegeta, she's not going to be very rested at all
| Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lets go update lets go clap clap lets go update lets go clap clap
| Title: YOU'RE DOING GREAT!!! KEEP WRITING....
Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know what I don't understand? Why is it people don't review when a good story is presented but review when it's not and then comment on how great it is. Please....*roll eyes* Really...people now a day just don't know a real good story when they see it. I really enjoy reading your stories. I already finished 'Bulma's Tail' many months ago and I'm still waiting for updates on 'Vegeta's Tail'. Don't forget to update that and I'll be waiting for updates to this story too. It's really interesting. I love the way you kept Vegeta in character. It's so much fun reading about Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. I especially love reading about Vegeta. What is it about mysterious and dangerous guys that girls love so much?...Anywayz, no more of my babbling. Just know that, even if you don't get many reviews..it doesn't matter, cuz your story is ENTERTAINING and ROMANTIC. It has it all!! Can't wait for the next update! Continue with the FINE job, you're doing GREAT!! Also, hope you finish all your stories and don't leave me hanging. I never like reading stories with no ending to it. Hate it when people do that...start but never finish. Oh my, I'm stalling. As I was saying..UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, and more UPDATE!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: doodily doo On: July 15, 2004 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic! It's so original and well thought out!!!!! I love it!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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