Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 17:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Oooh, wow. I am avidly interested now. This is looking very good, although you need to work on your grammar and your use of past, present, and future tenses a bit. But, other than that I can see nothing wrong. Keep up the good work, I can't wait till ya put out another chapter.
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