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Title: we want moar
Reviewed By: 3wy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, this story is getting better, please write more
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep going with this story. I like this story and would like to read more chapers. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Vash_The_Stampede3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story that is keeping me interested and i hope someone will finish it.
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Title: Grape Blood
Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 20:09 CST
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I know that it has been a long time sense you have heard anything from me, but I am going to finish this story. I have just gotten out of training and am now at my first duty station in Fort Lewis, Washington. Don't let the hype fool you the army is too easy. Till leter, bye.
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Reviewed By: saiyan prince1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 03:49 CDT
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update soon, e-mail me at lionvsdragon at yahoo to tell me if you will contine with this or not, casue i really like it
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Title: Payback
Reviewed By: Brax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Grape Blood!! Awesome idea, dude! I hope things are going well for you, because things are good for me, even though I\'m in the middle of exams! I hope Jack/Shinji teaches Asuka a lesson in respect for other people, preferrably with a sledge hammer! Kill the fucking neo-nazi slut! I hope that Jack kicks Asuka's ass, and sends Akira home in a fuckin body bag!
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Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 04:32 CDT
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Sorry for the long ass delay, alot of crap is going on and I'll try to update sooner.
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Screwyer and screwyer. A very unique story. I wonder if an agreement couldn't be struck between Jack and Shinji. Jack gets to come out and play when Shinji needs to fight or wants revenge, but Shinji has control of the day-to-day operations. Anyways, awesome story, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 12:44 CDT
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I know that chapter 4 was different but bare with me. The next chapter will be alittle blue with plenty of ass kicking.
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 04:27 CDT
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Man, this is gettin better and better. Shinji er, I mean Jack, is gonna kick some ass. Hope to see another chapter soon. - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 12:17 CDT
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I am sorry for the long delay, Some family came into town and I havent been able to get near the damn computer. Also they managed to give me the flu. The Flu! In the middle of summer. Anyway if you are a fan of senseless violence, watch for updates, you will be pleasently suprised.
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Reviewed By: Ficreader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic and a really hope that you continue on with it.
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Reviewed By: askthedonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but effective. A Good description of what is goin on but not overly done. The ony thing that has me overly conserned is that is what you will do with Shinji in this fic. Just because Shinji has absorbed his evil counter part does not mean that he will instantly become some badass-butt-kicking-ninja. (Although I expect him to become that. Why might u ask a Ninja? Ninja's are cool and so are gaint bio-mechs, so a NINJA in a bio-mech is 8 kinds of cool. (you dont need to make Shinji a ninja but he should be aleast kicking ass within the next 2 chapters.) Anyway make sure you spend some time letting Shinji have a chapter to himself to let him think of whos asses needs to be seriously kicked. Make sure you have some kind of oragin story for the darker side of Shinji. Maybe it is some kind of failed nerv project. Maybe Shinji himself is some kind of failed Nerv project. Could it be a Angel, a fallen-angel, or even a DEVIL ninja. Or could this darker entity possibly be a side of Shinji that was locked way when he was abandoned. The possibilities are endless. So keep up the good work and update soon. And just remember kids that pudding is the third most dangerous food group out there. ........... damn I want to waste all my Characters so i guess the rest of this review will be filled up with the words "I like beans." starting now I lik
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Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:30 CDT
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With a story like this, the directions that it can go are numerous. I as the writer would like the imput of you all, as the readers. Which directions should the story take? Or if you would, give me your opinions on the story. What could I do better, that sort of thing. I'll try to put a new chapter up by tonight, so just bare with me. Thats all for now.
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:18 CDT
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You sure are quick on the updates there, and thats always a good thing. And yes its true, not all fics can be great the first time around, but you can always try^_^ All that you gotta do is try, and you'll always keep getting better. And as for the chapter...I see red as a prominent color in Shinji's future. Black and blue as well...am I far off? Yeah! Let's see this fic earn its NC17 rating through indescriminate violence! Or perhaps through focused and channeled rage? Oh the possibilities...@_@
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