| "You Still Have All of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: 658498 On: August 16, 2004 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this emotion and lemon filled small little one shot. You brought emotion in which is incredibly rare for one shots. Nice.
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Title: You Still Have All of Me'
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was really and very tense...i always like to read these stories of vegeta and bulma....i hope that you can make it than just a oneshot...think about it....and keep writing.the lemmon was not that bad....maria
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