| "hells spawn" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
first of all thanks for reviewing my story i really apreciate it second you should learn to separate your story in paragraphs... they in which you are writting it makes it more like a big blur and it's kind of hard to follow... other than that your fic is great... keep going! =)
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Title: hells spawn
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 18, 2004 19:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for reviewing my story! i always try to repay the debt. umm, might i suggest you learn how to form paragraphs? and perhaps use quotation marks? the story is really hard to follow. though maybe it would help if it wasn't past midnight ill come back tomorow and read it slower. menatal not to self *read the fanfic rating* god im a dumbass...still, its not bad and i hope you'll keep going. Oh, and could someone please explain: when a youkai bites someone on the neck, does that make that someone the youkai's mate? i am so confused. Ive probably just been reading too much otherworld...they mte through sex in that. oh, im being yelled at, better go.
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