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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:50 CST
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It was extremely good. But as many others have said, It would be great if you would expand it to a story or sequal. You probably would get a lot of reviews becuase the plot about a runaway Inuyasha has not been used dead. But uo do have mad skills as a writter. I loved the lemon.
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Title: readit
Reviewed By: Sapphira_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this. I read it on another site months ago. Cool seeing it here. 10/10.
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Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic!! great ending with kagome running away with inuyasha so they could be together!!! but i was thinking... you could realy make a great story out of this, you have excelent writing and a great story line... you could write the fic telling about what happened to inuyasha that made him want to run away (basically his past), how he met kagome, what happened thst made him need to leave, and a breif epiloge about what happens now that they're together. it really would make a great story i'm sure (as long as you keep it orginal and not bouncing off the walls if you know what i mean). like i said, you have a great writing talent, and this could be something big. think about it ^_^ again this is a great fic, and keep writing one shots!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 09:36 CST
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its great like all your storyies are ^_^ but got u have to update bewitched please^_^ and u need to write more 1 shots like this ^_^ hehehe my fav stories are 1 shots with happy endings ^_^ but there so fuckin hard to find god lol ^_^ wellllllllllllllllllll ttyl thankz for adding me ^_^ BK
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i'm left speechless good thing i'm typing^^well awsome story can't wait to read more of your work^_^
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one-shot!! You really should coutinue. I'm so sad that ff.net deleted your fics, I hope you fix everything on ff.net soon.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect in every way, you could do a sequel that tells us about Inuyasha's past and how he and Kagome got together... not to mention they're first time together... (I'm a lemon fan, so sue me.) You could name it "Memories of the runaway". Well, that's just a suggestion but it might work! Anyway, this was perfect in every way, great work!
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Reviewed By: Peachy On: July 22, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE YOU SHOULD SO MAKE THIS A STORY THE ONE SHOT WAS TOTSLLY AWESOME I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peachy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 17:28 CDT
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Kawaii. I thought it was nicely done. But you could if you wanted to, expand on this idea. But hey that is only me. Great job. Keep up the good work.
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Title: best one shot lemon i've read!
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best one shot lemon I have ever read!! It was sooooo good that I wish you would write a story about it so we know what happened in his past and how he meet Kagome and what happened when they got to Japan! anyway people are really stupid on ff.net to have it deleted!!! I love your storys and hope you get everything on ff.net fixed soon!!!
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Title: yahoo!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Rin running outa things to say today! YES THE BLABBR MOUTH IS ALMOST SILENT! Do you know how manny fics Rin has reviewed today! Rin's computer has been down for a week now and when Rin checked Rin's mail Rin found like 20 fics were updated! Now Rin has to read and review all that are worthy(meaning all that were updated) Now what was Rin doing? Ah yes, this one rocks! You are one realy talented writer! unlike rin, rins fic totally sucks! but thats ok! rin likes to read other fics! dosnt matter if rin cant write some. Now rin shall continue to read rin's favorite fics! C YA L8ter rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 04:24 CDT
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Ok, so....are you going to do more or do we have to beg? It was an awesome lemon... You should keep wirting them so we could have the chance to enjoy an Inu/Kag pair!!! Keep the lemons on!! Did I sound needy?(lol)
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: July 16, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was a really great one... i have but one question... what was inu's past??? im sorry if the question sounds like what an idiot would say, but i wanted to sorta know... other than that, it was really good!!
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I think you should write more one-shots 'cause your really great at it. See ya!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. Good storyline and i love the last line Kagome says. Write more one shots, you're really good at it.
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