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Title: good job
Reviewed By: Inu/kag On: February 08, 2006 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was ap pretty good story..it was sweet..i liked it alot..good job
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Reviewed By: katie... On: December 24, 2005 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
awww, i loved this!!!! it was so cute.
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Reviewed By: JOEFLEO On: December 20, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused as to what is actually going on... Why can't he stay in *giggles* Arizona? (nice random place by the way) Congrats on you being able to have everything be gramatically correct and actually spelled correctly (I know, gasp) unlike more authors
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Reviewed By: chich On: December 20, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. Please write more like this one it is so good and I would love to read more.
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Title: wuuuuuut!!!
Reviewed By: fudge On: December 19, 2005 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Complete awesomeness!!!!!!! It was really creative and interesting. Way to come up with a great story! keepup the god work. karen
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT......you should make it not a one shot
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Title: The Runaway
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 17:51 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Sara R.
Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story:) I think you should totally write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I MUST see more of this, this story is just SO good!! You MUST write a sequel or something... i've sent you an Email about the possible ideas for a sequel to this one, please read it and reply to me.
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:50 CST
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It was extremely good. But as many others have said, It would be great if you would expand it to a story or sequal. You probably would get a lot of reviews becuase the plot about a runaway Inuyasha has not been used dead. But uo do have mad skills as a writter. I loved the lemon.
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Title: readit
Reviewed By: Sapphira_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this. I read it on another site months ago. Cool seeing it here. 10/10.
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Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic!! great ending with kagome running away with inuyasha so they could be together!!! but i was thinking... you could realy make a great story out of this, you have excelent writing and a great story line... you could write the fic telling about what happened to inuyasha that made him want to run away (basically his past), how he met kagome, what happened thst made him need to leave, and a breif epiloge about what happens now that they're together. it really would make a great story i'm sure (as long as you keep it orginal and not bouncing off the walls if you know what i mean). like i said, you have a great writing talent, and this could be something big. think about it ^_^ again this is a great fic, and keep writing one shots!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
its great like all your storyies are ^_^ but got u have to update bewitched please^_^ and u need to write more 1 shots like this ^_^ hehehe my fav stories are 1 shots with happy endings ^_^ but there so fuckin hard to find god lol ^_^ wellllllllllllllllllll ttyl thankz for adding me ^_^ BK
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i'm left speechless good thing i'm typing^^well awsome story can't wait to read more of your work^_^
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one-shot!! You really should coutinue. I'm so sad that ff.net deleted your fics, I hope you fix everything on ff.net soon.
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