| "Gestalt" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: AnzuNOTTea On: July 23, 2005 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO HOO! I've been looking all over thr net for Dual fiction. Don't suppose you could write some more for this and Temptress?
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 28, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original idea, I liked it alot. Please write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 28, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original idea, I liked it alot. Please write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: FanFicPotato [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I am a big fan of this series. You had a good knowledge of the ending... and I liked how you tied the story to the ending. I think you should had cut out some of the extra details... not that I didn't like it... but made it a bit boring. Um... oh it had a good lemon scene... however I would finish it later by adding their boy lover. That way you can add more lemon scene and attract the reader's attention more. So anyways... I have to say overall... it was good. PS You are welcome to read mine also.
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