| "Tempted" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 11:42 CDT
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alright then, that was nice! hehe, Bakura couldn't steal Yami's puzzle he, he's out of shape, poor guy!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:12 CST
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*Giggles uncontrollably.* I am not sure if that was meant to be funny or not but I sure as hell got a good laugh out of it! Bakura only F***ing Yami to get his puzzle... Well if Yami was attracted to Bakura then yeah I could somehow see that... I also loved the cocky banter back and forth between them... This was a fairly good fic in fact, let's see what you come up with the next time around!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd already read this fic, but I guess bad me forgot to review. It is very good. I like how you write lemons...detailed without being overdone. I am going to subtly encourage you to write more. PLEASE WRITE MORE! This couple rocks. That last thing about the ring was kind of funny...I don't know if it was supposed to be.
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Reviewed By: Mistress Of Smoochies On: July 29, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really dont think that Yami, would crawl to Bakura's feet like some slut in the heat as he did in this ficcy. Anyways Yami was too OOC, i mean. I dont think that Yami would go "stick things up his ass"Yami is more like a "Sinister Seducer" not some everyday whore.
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Reviewed By: a fellow yaoi fan On: July 25, 2004 18:59 CDT
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This was a good fic. I barely read any B/YY stories. They are my favorite couple if you plan on adding a chapter put in more smut. ^-~ P.S = keep writing Love Nancy
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Title: Yami's Lover
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe i am the first one to review this b/c it was so good! You should have 100 reviews by now. I love Yami and Bakura is such a smart ass^^ they are so hot together. I cant wait for the next chapter! Loved the lemon, keep up the good work* giggles* cock ring hahaha! Ja ne!
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