"The Breaking of Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: October 05, 2004 12:20 EDT Comment/Review: Great chapter. Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:08 EDT Comment/Review: I'm liking this fic. Please continue to update. Thanks
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Reviewed By: SevenStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 15:05 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Kagome turned into a hanyou is not original true but the story line is very good. So do continue and compleat this tale.
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: September 20, 2004 12:25 EDT Comment/Review: Great chapter. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 18, 2004 20:50 EDT Comment/Review: Don't worry about it, hope the tests go well. Loved the chapter, really excellent. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 19:03 EDT Comment/Review: OMG now I cant wait fot the next chapter update soon pwease??????
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 18, 2004 18:28 EDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter, sorry I took so long to review. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Sweet Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:38 EDT Comment/Review: Great story so far i like it a lot. U have a really good plot here. Keep up the good work and update soon. plz and thank u. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 13:55 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awwww i wish that kag and inu can get back together asap
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Title: I LOVE YA Reviewed By: Rumiko Takahashi (not login) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 08:57 EDT Comment/Review: UPDATE SOON!!!!! AND NO MORE CLIFFYS!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: September 17, 2004 05:36 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The plot thickens eh? Hehe, good chapter, really good... i know what it's like when you're drowning in tests or something similar, i also know how hard it is to write sometimes so don't be hasteful when writing, if i had been hasteful in my own stories they would not be so high qualified at all... anyway, i'm eager for the next update!
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: September 16, 2004 13:06 EDT Comment/Review: Good job and great chapter. Can't wait for the update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 12:41 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awwwwww please update!!!!!!! i really like this story
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Reviewed By: TLM On: September 15, 2004 23:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is EXCELLENT except for one thing, have Kagome fight. You made her a youkai now lets see her kick some ass. Keep the updates coming, please.
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Title: CrystalEyedYasha Reviewed By: CrystalEyedYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:37 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON! Or....I'll hunt you down and force ya to write it! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Keep updating!! -Annie-
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