| "Sorry I'm Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU_siLENcE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:42 CDT
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dang!! talk bout high tolerance to pain ... i can't believe i was still up ... holy crap O.O ... but still yeah that was a really good chapter ... even gots youko in it ^^ .. and i still got him ...wahahaha ... hehe awesome chapter!! i hope you update again soon =) ^^
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Title: Sorry I'm Broken
Reviewed By: KristyKamae On: August 24, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to read more. You have no idea how much I love this story. Its one in which I can place myself in completely. I do have a suggestion. Yoko is Kurama's ruthless and cold-hearted side. U might wanna consider showing his appearence if u wanna show the character suffer from a merciless youkai intent on raping and/or killing her. Anyways its really great Iluv it. Plz update soon.
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Title: Sorry I'm Broken
Reviewed By: KristyKamae On: August 24, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to read more. You have no idea how much I love this story. Its one in which I can place myself in completely. I do have a suggestion. Yoko is Kurama's ruthless and cold-hearted side. U might wanna consider showing his appearence if u wanna show the character suffer from a merciless youkai intent on raping and/or killing her. Anyways its really great Iluv it. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 00:03 CDT
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omg i love Blink 182! such a sweet song.....i love ur fic! update soon pls!
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Reviewed By: Baby_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 11:56 CDT
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Update PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Reviewed By: Angel_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:15 CDT
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This is really good keep it up ^^
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Reviewed By: yukina189 On: August 09, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good cant wait for you to wright the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Larka Sikla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:24 CDT
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'Nother thing, could you make this a Hiei/Reader fic? That'd be really cool, cause I see so many Kurama/Reader's...Keep up the good work though.
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Reviewed By: Larka Sikla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:22 CDT
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O.O Wow....interesting, at least the reader isn't a crybaby, not like some other Insert You's. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 09:14 CDT
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Wow... Kinda shocked me like the rest of the gang. Update!
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Reviewed By: Sparrow666 On: August 07, 2004 19:47 CDT
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THIS IS AWESOME!!! its very original. I absolutely love it! not to mention i kick ass! ^_^ update soon, i am definitely keeping tabs on this one.
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Reviewed By: shadow star [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was like O_O. It rocked.Plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 16:46 CDT
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Interesting,...I really liked it!! Update some time soon!!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Trey On: August 06, 2004 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! This story is really interesting and I LOVE it!!!
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU siLENcE On: August 06, 2004 06:00 CDT
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wahahaha!! she can't make me suffer!! ... i can take any blows you send towards me ... WAHAHAH!! lolz .. anyways ... wow .. brutal but that was still an awesome chapter ^^ .. hehe .. great job!! hope you update again soon!! =)
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