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Reviewed By: DemonicAngel98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANGSTY!I love it!MUST READ MORE!
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Reviewed By: FireAngel-Kayona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I would just like to say that your writting is exelent. From what I can tell, you have kept everyone in chairicter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I love how you wrote it in second person POV. It's not used very often and I found it very easy to picture everything from that angle. Please tell me you'll update?
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Reviewed By: Saku_Chan On: July 17, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a good job.It's well written^^v Keep going! I murdered someone!?!?!?!?
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