| "Sorry I'm Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shinimegami_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! this is beautifully written! ^_____^ please update asap! this story rocks and is very original!
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Reviewed By: Hiei's Baka Onna On: October 16, 2004 17:23 CDT
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NOOO! WHY'D YOU STOP!! >|!! UPDATE!!! J00!! NOOW!! *GASP* Please. Hiei: She babbles like an idiot when she's overly excited. -_-;; Just update.
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Reviewed By: Kuramasblackrose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:48 CDT
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okay... That was odd........ Oh well! I still like it! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Akki_the_Insane [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 19:15 CDT
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like your story, angsty and bloody. gives me a warm fuzzy feeling ^_^hehe update soon, can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I've put it on my favs. list. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Legato (formerly Sparrow666) On: August 29, 2004 13:40 CDT
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OH! GOOD CHAP GOOD CHAP!! REALLY GOOD STORY!! AAAH!!! IT RAWKS SO BAD!!! ^_^ *hyperventilates* this is THE BEST angsty story i've read in eternity! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Mistress_Of_Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 14:02 CDT
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uh...wow...This is some good fic...I am speechless...
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Reviewed By: Erika M On: August 25, 2004 12:53 CDT
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Evil place to leave off. Please update soon. I really like it. A lot of blood though **Flinches**. Not that it bothers me. I see alot of blood. After all I live in a family with tough kids who like to fight! Anyways I hope that you update realllllly soon. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 10:49 CDT
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OMG! I was gonna kill Youko! Update!
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 17:46 CDT
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I have a bad feeling thou about wat might happen to me, but update as soon as you can!
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Title: HIYA
Reviewed By: Black Cat Sumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 17:12 CDT
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WOW!!!ur really good please update soon!!*throws a Hiei plushie*
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Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:55 CDT
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yooooooo this fic is so cool! continue please!
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU_siLENcE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:42 CDT
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dang!! talk bout high tolerance to pain ... i can't believe i was still up ... holy crap O.O ... but still yeah that was a really good chapter ... even gots youko in it ^^ .. and i still got him ...wahahaha ... hehe awesome chapter!! i hope you update again soon =) ^^
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Title: Sorry I'm Broken
Reviewed By: KristyKamae On: August 24, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to read more. You have no idea how much I love this story. Its one in which I can place myself in completely. I do have a suggestion. Yoko is Kurama's ruthless and cold-hearted side. U might wanna consider showing his appearence if u wanna show the character suffer from a merciless youkai intent on raping and/or killing her. Anyways its really great Iluv it. Plz update soon.
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Title: Sorry I'm Broken
Reviewed By: KristyKamae On: August 24, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to read more. You have no idea how much I love this story. Its one in which I can place myself in completely. I do have a suggestion. Yoko is Kurama's ruthless and cold-hearted side. U might wanna consider showing his appearence if u wanna show the character suffer from a merciless youkai intent on raping and/or killing her. Anyways its really great Iluv it. Plz update soon.
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