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"Ashes, Ashes, We All Fall Down" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ]
 Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2007 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I finally found it! I have been searching for this story for about a year now and expected to find it with more chapters but was disappointed. But it really doesn't matter, I still love this story and When Light Meets Darkness and all the other stories that connect with it. YOu are such a wonderful and expressive author. I like the way you use these characters and create something of your own that is unique and original. I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. Continue writing and you will continue to hear from me! ~MangaChild420 aka A-jay
 Reviewed By: Neechi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O That's so awesome! *congratulates* Yay! ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2004 01:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, I love this (yet another) alternate fic... but you can't leave me standing here with this cliffie! I need to know... did they actually do "it"? *snicker* Maybe Farfie can help through the withdrawls... and with the rest of the assasins he can defeat Claude... keep Kenken with the one he is fated to be with... please! Update soon, ok? I have a fear of falling off the cliff!
 Reviewed By: vampire of night [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2004 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
sniff sniff. why do u have to stop here. It is so good. Please update soon. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: true source  On: September 16, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your fics are great, and you probably made Ken my fav WK char. he's so cute and Farfie is perfect for him, can't wait till you update ^-^
 Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: shadow_tempest  On: August 17, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this new story! I liked all your other ones like a Tale of Two Chibis and your Light Meets Darkness fics, but this one just seems so much different. It's mysterious and so interesting. I really hope you update soon on all of your fanfics. I'll be sure to visit often to read them! Update soon!
 Title: Light, Ashes, A tale of 2 chibis
Reviewed By: Hectate of Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 22, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
oi chaos i love all your fics they're really interesting but pls update more often if you can. if you're stuck in writers block email me and i'll help you because your fics are simply too well written to let them sit and collect viruses (XP) Anyway you may be spoiling us by giving tidbits of up and coming stories but come on you must admit that's one of the reasons we love you so much. Now as to your newest fic; Ashes Ashes, i always was quite partial to a farfie/ken or a brad/ken with a farfie/ran ring to it. i'm a bit twisted but then again who isn't? pls keep up the good work and update as soon as possible. your stories make my day seem less dull. Thanks for your time. always avid fan, Hectate of flame
 Title: Why are you so cruel?
Reviewed By: Trevanna [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 18, 2004 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, Vincent is Siberian. In the opening I didn't suspect. I began to envision it when Ken wasn't mentioned, then when there was the pang of recognition, I knew. But whyfor has our sweet Ken succumbed to mental madness? Obviously someone's been tinkering with his beautiful brain. Was he captured? Was it Claude? Okay, so judging from the fact that Claude's voice keeps popping up in Ken's head, I 'm going to say that it's Claude who's wiped his brain clean of all the Siberianeque glory that once resided there. But Schu will help, won't he? He'll bring our Kenken back to us, right? *bites nails* And you know, Ken and Crawford are having some really good interactions in this chapter, I'm really tempted to say that that's the pairing you should go with. Taking the drug that the doctor perscribed, eh? Mind controlling drugs, I say, mind controlling. Bastard Claude. Not that, given the opportunity, I wouldn't do the same, but it's still not fair. And yes, my vote is for Brad. It would be an interesting dynamic and it seems it would be easy to integrate it into the stuff you've already got here. Go Brad! And more spoiling! More torture, you mean...tantalizing bits of story dangled before my plot-starved eyes...cruel CD, just cruel. But please, keep it up. You're not supposed to leave us in a duct with Berserker chasing Bombay and Siberian...that's just not right. I want to see Farfie glomp him, dammit! Character limits suck, by the way.
 Reviewed By: lazy wench  On: July 18, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woohoo, more great stories to read! yay! Ashes to Ashes ios disturbing in a big way and the preview of the other one is just too funny! Miko no Tears and Aya

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