"As Deemed By Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 09, 2004 18:45 CST Comment/Review: Wow! Excellent chapter! I wonder what will happen when she wakes up and realises just 'who' saved her and how he will explain having a girl at his place... Have a good break! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 23:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THAT WAS TOTALLY AWSOME!!!!!!! I HOPE THAT YOU CAN UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ I JUST LOVES YA STORY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!! ^_^ your soing an awsome job!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 14:03 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Awesome piece! Very hot and steamy ^^ I can't wait til things kick up a notch {can they?} =) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:08 CDT Comment/Review: HEY!! great story!! i really enjoyed it!! i can't wait to find out what happens next!! well update soon!! ViciousVamp
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 23:06 CDT Comment/Review: cools beans. mi like.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 01, 2004 18:47 CDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: August 05, 2004 03:11 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Can't wait to see what's in store for Inuyasha. Update soon, I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: Lady In A Red Dress On: July 30, 2004 12:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your stories!! Your one of the best writer's on the net! You've gotta update soon! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: Anits8eli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 14:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Great star! update soon cuz I can't wait!..........bye.............
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Title: Wow Reviewed By: sutashiii On: July 20, 2004 19:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely love this!! I cant wait for the sparks to fly when they meet! Amazing your doing a great job! and I cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 02:04 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey great story can't wait to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: Mute22 On: July 18, 2004 01:34 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Story is so good! Please continue I enjoy reading it!!!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:41 CDT Comment/Review: Ohhhh!!! I like this one. That chapter was such a teaser, I can't wait till they meet and the real sparks fly! Keep on writing!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 17, 2004 20:02 CDT Comment/Review: Nice start, enjoyed the chapter. You did some excellent build up there, setting the scene nicely. Now we just have to wait and watch the characters lives go straight to hell... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: July 17, 2004 17:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: That was good!!! Write more!!! I can't wait to see how the story develops!!!
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