| "As Deemed By Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: just wondering
Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 14:50 CST
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i really like this story.... just wanted to know if you were ever going to update it again... Thanks!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Why did you stop writting??? Why??!!! i'ts been a year already, i think... You have to update this i'ts really good
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 00:01 CST
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I'm happy you updated! ^^ At least Kagome and Inuyasha are on good terms now that the contractor thing is cleared up. Oh lord, I can just imagine what's going to happen when Kikyou shows up and finds Kagome there. More importantly, I wonder how Inuyasha will react to the whole situation since he seems to really like having Kagome there. Three weeks till he marries Kikyou...*shudders at the thought* We already know they are both attracted to each other but I doubt Kagome is going to make any moves as long as Inuyasha is engaged to Kikyou, that's for sure. She has high moral standards. I can't wait to see how everything turns it and I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing. ;) hehe
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot damn this is gonna be good
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Title: Aggggggggggggg!!!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 12, 2006 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just to good!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER. I THINK THE FUR IS GOANA FLY HEHE MOSTALY DOG FUR, LOL LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M HOLDING MY BREATH WAITING FOR THE UPDATES PLEASE HURRY I DON'T LOOK GOOD BLUE!!!!!! I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 14:55 CDT
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ooooh... Kikyou came home..
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Reviewed By: me 2 On: October 08, 2006 14:33 CDT
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i'm happy you got your inspiration back. i was there from the beginning, and i'm gonna be there till the end. just make sure you have fun writing the story. update soon cause that was a good chapter. ja ne
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 01:02 CDT
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LOVED this chapter. I thought the ending was good and bad. Good in a sense, where it was very clever and well-written. Bad, cus I hate cliffies, lol. I can't wait for the next chapyer. Awesome writing. ;-)
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Title: OOOMG
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 07, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE TELL ME THERES MORE!!!! I PICKED THIS STORY UP TODAY AND DIDN'T STOP TIL I RAN OUT OF CHAPTERS....IT'S JUST TO GOOD TO STOP NOW THERE MUST BE UPDATES!!!!\"OMG\" Had to read it twice it was that good!!!! It plays like a movie in your mind.... I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS,
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: October 05, 2006 08:21 CDT
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I like the story so far, it's really got meaning to it and I like that factor. The way you type, has me hooked to this story. I can't wait for the next chapter though I don't know when you'll be posting. Well I gots to go, I'm going to read another fanfic before I have classes. Well Happy writings and a Merry Muse.
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Title: Chapters 1-8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you've set up the plot so far since it's abound with mystery and intrigue. I also like the contrast between Kagome and Kikyou. At first I missed the demon/miko stuff but I got used to it. ;) Your chapter length is perfect making each chapter equally worth the read. I love how Kagome is slowly cracking the shell Inuyasha has built around his past and family life. I can only hope it'll get better but I know it'll get messy when Kikyou finds out about the new living arrangement, lol. I truly hope Inu and Kags end up together since in your story they really seem to click. I also hope for Inu/Kag because Kikyou doesn't love Inu like she should and doesn't appreciate him at all. I feel so bad for him because he's completely oblivious. I hope you update soon with another great chapter that I look forward to reading! ^^
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing. It is very good. I cant wait to see how you accually bring these two closer. But I will be watching a waiting for your updates to read. Thanks so much for writing this story and keeping me happily entertained. lol. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Charlee On: September 30, 2006 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorYa know it gets harder everyday to find a story u enjoy reading...it took me forever to find yours...i love it! I wish there were mor authors out there like you! I could picture every event in my head and that makes a fantatic story it's almost like a movie...Update soon...make the next one even better! -Charlee (luvible_kisses17@ahoo.com)
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Title: coool
Reviewed By: awesomesave.. On: February 19, 2006 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmm AWESOME im glad u updated...i love this story ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, just one thing perplexes me?? why do u use the word "save" i duno if its some writing style or w/e =p but isnt it supposed to be "except" like everything was cool except his face" everything was cool save his face?? i duno something like that u do in ur story...update sooon =)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 14, 2006 18:36 CST
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Magnificent chapter, as always. Nice to see Inuyasha is opening up a ittle, even if he is still concealing who he is from her. But, it would seem that she is doing the same. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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