Reviewed By: trapt_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh. This has to be the first time I've ever read this pairing (and yes, it could be considered a pairing, it would just be soley Sayuki/Kyouichi as opposed to Kyouichi/Sayuki). It's a change from the Kyou/Ryo, and an entertaining change at that. I didn't catch any errors spelling or grammar wise, and that always makes me feel better about a story. Not to say that the plot was bad or anything remotely like that, just that the English related section of that was well done. As for the plot, the beginning seemed slightly PWP (which is no cut down, it's simply that, well, there isn't much of a plot in that. Duh...), but then it evened out at the end. Overall, I figured it was weel written, and worth reading. Job well done.
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