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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:13 EDT
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Yippee, you updated, (jumps around)! I was beginning to loose hope. Great chapter. I love the kitty bet scene, too funny. Love the cliffy, I was wondering when the stalker would get to her. Great setup for him to nab her in her apartment. I can't wait for the anguish to build. Thanks for updating and thanks for sharing your incredible gift with us!!
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Reviewed By: Sesseika-Chan On: June 21, 2005 15:49 EDT
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Really good... EVIL CLIFFIE!! But keep up the good work.. I
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Reviewed By: LeAnne On: June 21, 2005 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course you had to do it! There needs to be a problem in order for there to be a resolution. And You couldn't leave us hanging with the whole stalker thing!! It would be unheard of!!! Wonderful chapter. Always enjoy your stories :)
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Reviewed By: nek0chan_rwar On: June 17, 2005 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo good! I don't usually like AU fics, but this one rocks! I hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: June 05, 2005 16:29 EDT
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Awesome. I just finished your last chapter and I am hooked. I can't wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:08 EDT
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Hey, If you need someone to proofread I will volunteer my services. (Sneaky way to get you to update) Smiles! Please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 27, 2005 21:46 EDT
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I'm half-way thru chapter 1 and I would like to suggest that you get one of your friends to proofread for you. Everyone makes grammar/typing mistakes, BUT it's almost impossible to see it in your own writing. The content of this fic is excellent, and I'm going to read and enjoy it anyway, but there's a ton of mistakes that are distracting.
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please contunue this story!!!! it's one of my favorite kag/roku stories. will they ever have an actually happy ending and also who is the stalker??? please do us all a favor and let us know lol :)
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Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, What a great love story. It's so sweet!
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Title: aw
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 11:12 EDT
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aside from some missing words and little type-o's it was great. So you're going to update soon, ne?
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:10 EDT
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Hey, It has been awhile since your last update and I was wondering if you were planning to continue or were suffering from some writers block. I hope you do continue; the readers do enjoy this story! You have even been nominated for best alternate pairing by the fanguild. I started reading one of your other stories- The Bacchanalia, and I have really enjoyed that one also! You are a great writer. I hope you pick up both again soon. If you need any help let me know! BTW thank you for sharing you fics!
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Reviewed By: Kalika_ray On: March 28, 2005 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really fun fic... even though there's a nasty twist in middle, but it just add more excitement to this fic... ur a really good author, I hope u don't mind me for adding my self in ur e-mailing list....
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: Bright~Iris On: March 14, 2005 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iee!!!! Don't leave me hanging! I want to know the rest! Write more, and quickly!!! Please? [puppy dog eyes]
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Reviewed By: phuu On: March 06, 2005 04:40 EST
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o.O you cant have a period when you're pregnant. your period flushes out the egg along with the blood, so how can she have her period?
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great alternated pairing. I think this story is wonderfully creative. The stalker scenes are great, graphic, and you cover every detail! It really shows that you put a lot of thought into your work. The confession of love scene is great, but I am a bit confused. Do they fall asleep in her office? I can't wait to see where you go with this. Will the drug Kagome ingested affect the baby? Will the stalker catch up with them especially now that I am sure he has witnesses the last scene? Like I said great alternate pairing, I hope you keep the story going! Thanks for the great story!
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