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Title: GREAT!!
Reviewed By: Loco Coco On: September 19, 2004 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I like how you kept the characters the same even though they are in an alternate universe and are in a different situation. Great work! You are really good at updating at a normal rate too. It's a really good story! I anticipate other great chapters for this story!
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Reviewed By: Seeker34(not logged in) On: September 18, 2004 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like your stories. I love the plots you come up with. This one is no exception. Keep it comin'! I can't wait to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: StarletAngel On: September 14, 2004 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's just so sweet. And it's Miroku and Kagome, my fave couple :) Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 20:33 EDT
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Great chapter. Lace huh. Good thing she isn't being spinned around. Nice song. Really fits the mood. cools beans. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kit1002 On: September 12, 2004 03:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grr.. my last review didn't get posted. >_< i just wanted to say that i am glad you are back!! i hope that everything is ok with your family. (i read it on ffnet) i LOVE this chapter! they are soooo cute together! and the "souvenir" part was really funny ^_^ i LOVE this fanfic!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 23:40 EDT
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You know I think I have gotten addicted to your story. I can't get enough. So update really soon, ok. Great chapter. I am glad that maybe they are realizing that something is starting with them. And I don't mean a baby. Later.
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Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH my, I'm usually a Inuyasha/Kagome shipper but this fic makes me want Miroku and Kagome together. I do hope they stay together! It was excellent by the way. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Kit1002 On: September 06, 2004 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read on ffnet that you are having a family emergency and i just wanted to let you know that my thoughts are with you. And although I've already said it: this is a great chapter!!! I am definitely sticking w/this story no matter what :)
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 00:46 EDT
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That was a great chapter. I loved the Sess and Sango moment. I really can see that Miroku is starting to have thoughts of just Kagome. I wonder if he is being abstance between his fun with her. ALl for the baby, right? Right. Keep up the good work. Later.
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Reviewed By: Narakusmiasma (too lazy to sign in!) On: September 05, 2004 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Wonderful Dah-ling! Simply Wonderful! TeeHee! I love how Miroku is still Miroku even in the Modern World. The shirt was a VERY nice touch! *applaudes* ~Your devoted reader
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 21:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
cools
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Reviewed By: inuyashas On: September 01, 2004 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl you're creative and keep me thinking. I love your work. Please keep it up.
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Title: About time
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 22:30 EDT
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Sorry, I couldn't resist. Love Desiree. She is just what Kagome needs to realize that Miroku is more than just a good (really good) friend. I really want to know what he said to Kagome on the sofa at Sesshoumaru's office. You know, after she was attacked. Just what did he say? She got all relaxed. I have rack my braind trying to think of what it was. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 19:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans. so this guy who keeps stalking her, is he the mugger? and why is he stalking her?
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 22:13 EDT
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This is great. Now I know you have another chapter already written. Couse I read it of FF. So you have no excuss to not update. We will be waiting. Please don't hesitate. Hope to see more soon. Later.
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