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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:10 EDT
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Hey, It has been awhile since your last update and I was wondering if you were planning to continue or were suffering from some writers block. I hope you do continue; the readers do enjoy this story! You have even been nominated for best alternate pairing by the fanguild. I started reading one of your other stories- The Bacchanalia, and I have really enjoyed that one also! You are a great writer. I hope you pick up both again soon. If you need any help let me know! BTW thank you for sharing you fics!
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Reviewed By: Kalika_ray On: March 28, 2005 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really fun fic... even though there's a nasty twist in middle, but it just add more excitement to this fic... ur a really good author, I hope u don't mind me for adding my self in ur e-mailing list....
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: Bright~Iris On: March 14, 2005 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iee!!!! Don't leave me hanging! I want to know the rest! Write more, and quickly!!! Please? [puppy dog eyes]
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Reviewed By: phuu On: March 06, 2005 04:40 EST
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o.O you cant have a period when you're pregnant. your period flushes out the egg along with the blood, so how can she have her period?
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great alternated pairing. I think this story is wonderfully creative. The stalker scenes are great, graphic, and you cover every detail! It really shows that you put a lot of thought into your work. The confession of love scene is great, but I am a bit confused. Do they fall asleep in her office? I can't wait to see where you go with this. Will the drug Kagome ingested affect the baby? Will the stalker catch up with them especially now that I am sure he has witnesses the last scene? Like I said great alternate pairing, I hope you keep the story going! Thanks for the great story!
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Reviewed By: tennisbug [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 03:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! I think that this is my favorite fanfic that i have ever read. Each chapter seems like a lot of thought and time was put into it. I can't wait to see what will happen next. :)
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Reviewed By: Seeker34(not logged in) On: February 14, 2005 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I love this fic and that was such a sweet chapter. Please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: LeAnne On: February 14, 2005 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!!!! so excited!!! always love getting new chapters from you, and this is the BEST!!!! *squeels with excitement* they love each other, and they admitted it!!!! And she's pregnant!!!!! *cries* so sad about Sarah, I hope they do have a girl, and I pray that the drugs didn't do anything to the baby!!! I assume that she told Miroku about being in the hospital? Because it's not in the text but she says that it came up on the hospitals tests. Or did he just not notice what she said? hmmm.... the stalker guy is really scaring me. If he was the same guy that was serving her, she was talking right to him! ahhh!! scary.... but very VERY good story!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Janiekat3617 On: January 31, 2005 21:05 EST
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hey! I love this story! its awesome and ure doing a splendid job! I just can't wait for more!!! ~*Janiekat
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:05 EST
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Ah poor Kagome. A stalker, Inuyasha for a month and no sex. Bab combination. But looks like they got away from it all at the end. Hope they make their relationship official. I mean the finally tell each other their love. And get Inuyasha to see reason. Hope you can update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: November 20, 2004 11:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one! THanks and update when you can... you know we love this fic!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Witch Child (not logged in) On: November 10, 2004 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a wonderful story and beautifully and tastefully written. Your a wonderful author and I simply LOVE this story! Please update soon!
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Title: Rockin'
Reviewed By: Loco Coco On: October 11, 2004 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is safe to say I LOVE your story! I've been reading your other ones too and I am totally convinced that you are one of the best writers on fanfiction and mediaminer! That's no joke! I love the way you portray all of the characters! You don't stray far from their original personalities. Even in the modern world Miroku is still the same! Your story is definitely a winner in my book! I love the Sesshomaru hug too! *hehe* That was so cute and totally unexpected but in a good way! YOu rock and your story is kickin! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Seeker34(not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It is so sweet! Can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Mme. Purple On: October 10, 2004 00:49 EDT
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This fic is wonderful, following in the footsteps of your other writing. I am incoherent and currently incapable of putting any information in here more useful or insightful than, the formatting got really messed up. The first couple of words in each paragraph aren't there, just thought you ought to know.
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