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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! Poor Yohji, please have Aya find him soon. Very painful, very good chapter. Come back soon please with more.
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job with this fic, very well done development of characters. And the plot...damn...I totally didn't see the twist of the couple kidnapping Yohji coming. Nice direction with A and Y's relationship, too, very IC reactions to one another with a realistic depth. Smashing job, I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: September 03, 2004 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god, write more now! Ahem, umm, hmm, well it would seem that my mental filter isn't quite working. Regardless, that's how I feel. This story is so cool and angsty and wow. So please write and update when you can. Thanks much ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable both this and the prequel. Looking forward to the next chap!
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Title: Ch2
Reviewed By: justkat. Realio, trulio.^^ On: August 12, 2004 04:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's good! Poor Yohji.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
more...more..more
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Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 06:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no! Aya how could you! I like this a lot. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love how it started and the summary sounds very interesting! I DO like your fics in general, please update soon, ne! ~Ko-chan~
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