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Reviewed By: Otala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 22:43 CST
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Please keep going. Sequel? Epilogue? Anything? I don't want him to die, Aya just missed by one afternoon.
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Title: EVIL!!!!
Reviewed By: Silver Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 16:19 CST
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That was just mean to end it like that!! :( I hope that Yohji will be ok. More Please!!!!
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Title: GREAT !!!!
Reviewed By: nightwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish ur story!!!! PLEASE I"LL GIVE U TEN THOUSAND COOKIES that taste ver good and have mulitpul cholate chips in them :P i love ur story i dea i would have liked to kill that bastarded doctor my self and make sure he suffered *evil grin followed my manicnal laughter* oh ya and they didn't have a 127 that i could put on the enjoyment so 10 will have to do! :)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 20:20 CST
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beggin for an update...*big watery chibi eyes*
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 17:28 CST
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i know i shouldn't harass but I am dying for an update!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 19:49 CST
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could have sworn i posted this earlier, but i can't wait for an update for this fic.
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Reviewed By: Tameiki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 01:08 CDT
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Just found this today. Naughty girl. Hiding a gem like this. Now that I've found this, PLEASE update soon! *hugs*
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Title: CaT
Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're story is so good! i feel bad for yoji and aya, especially for yoji. it's so sad! i can't waint to see what you decide to do for the next few chapters. i'm just really glad that aya found yoji, thought for a while there he may not have, which would have been really really really sad. awesome fic! keep writing please!! =^^=
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, you're back! Poor Yohji. Yea for Aya's determined rescue of Yohji, and for your depiction of him getting ready for and executing the mission even while distracted and worried. I also liked Birman's and Aya-chan's responses. It is wonderful seeing all of these characters so well depicted in character. Now for the healing of Yohji, and taking care of the doctor. I look forward to more.
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: Elfen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Finally Aya has Yohji back! But poor Yohji... I hope he remembers that Aya did kiss him back. *sigh* Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Yoake Halo On: April 08, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave it off there!!! You have to continue with this fic. It would be wrong not to. Please, please update sometime soon. I'm begging you.
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Reviewed By: Gay Sherman On: April 04, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!! I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Ch On: February 12, 2005 21:43 CST
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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT PLease continue I absolutely love it. It is so touching. I hope Ran will come to his senses and find Yohji before he gets hurt even more!!!! -MangaChild420
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 03:26 CST
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o.o thats so sad! :is gonna cry: i hope they find yoji!!! i'll cry if they dont :( ch5 is good! but oh so short! *preys that u finish* >.< i hate it when ppl don't! but i do love this story w/a passion! aya will find his yoji...right? *hopefull*
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Reviewed By: Flamingolol On: January 22, 2005 02:10 CST
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I'm so glad to see an update on this intriguing ficcie. Crazy new developments, great new chapter; as much as I enjoy Yohji torture, I find my mantra being "find him" while I read ^_^ I love how I never know which way you're going to go with this fic, every time I'm sure I've got the plot figured out you veer in a new direction. Great job, I'm really enjoying this twisted ficcie. Ever eager for more!
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