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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, you're back! Poor Yohji. Yea for Aya's determined rescue of Yohji, and for your depiction of him getting ready for and executing the mission even while distracted and worried. I also liked Birman's and Aya-chan's responses. It is wonderful seeing all of these characters so well depicted in character. Now for the healing of Yohji, and taking care of the doctor. I look forward to more.
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: Elfen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Finally Aya has Yohji back! But poor Yohji... I hope he remembers that Aya did kiss him back. *sigh* Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Yoake Halo On: April 08, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave it off there!!! You have to continue with this fic. It would be wrong not to. Please, please update sometime soon. I'm begging you.
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Reviewed By: Gay Sherman On: April 04, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!! I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Ch On: February 12, 2005 21:43 CST
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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT PLease continue I absolutely love it. It is so touching. I hope Ran will come to his senses and find Yohji before he gets hurt even more!!!! -MangaChild420
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 03:26 CST
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o.o thats so sad! :is gonna cry: i hope they find yoji!!! i'll cry if they dont :( ch5 is good! but oh so short! *preys that u finish* >.< i hate it when ppl don't! but i do love this story w/a passion! aya will find his yoji...right? *hopefull*
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Reviewed By: Flamingolol On: January 22, 2005 02:10 CST
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I'm so glad to see an update on this intriguing ficcie. Crazy new developments, great new chapter; as much as I enjoy Yohji torture, I find my mantra being "find him" while I read ^_^ I love how I never know which way you're going to go with this fic, every time I'm sure I've got the plot figured out you veer in a new direction. Great job, I'm really enjoying this twisted ficcie. Ever eager for more!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! Poor Yohji, please have Aya find him soon. Very painful, very good chapter. Come back soon please with more.
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job with this fic, very well done development of characters. And the plot...damn...I totally didn't see the twist of the couple kidnapping Yohji coming. Nice direction with A and Y's relationship, too, very IC reactions to one another with a realistic depth. Smashing job, I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: September 03, 2004 17:45 CDT
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Oh my god, write more now! Ahem, umm, hmm, well it would seem that my mental filter isn't quite working. Regardless, that's how I feel. This story is so cool and angsty and wow. So please write and update when you can. Thanks much ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable both this and the prequel. Looking forward to the next chap!
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Title: Ch2
Reviewed By: justkat. Realio, trulio.^^ On: August 12, 2004 04:12 CDT
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It's good! Poor Yohji.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 20:41 CDT
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more...more..more
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Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 06:07 CDT
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Oh no! Aya how could you! I like this a lot. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 13:55 CDT
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I love how it started and the summary sounds very interesting! I DO like your fics in general, please update soon, ne! ~Ko-chan~
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