| "The Quicker Pecker-Upper" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: puffin On: July 26, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one. For a one-short it was great. I really can't wait to read more stories or one-shorts from you. Keep it up. You are very good at it.
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Title: Finally got around to it...
Reviewed By: Lady A On: July 22, 2004 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I finnaly had the time to write you a review. Which you by the way really deserve. You're great. Sorry if I offended you with the will you marry me thing. I joke around like that. It's my way of saying you're too good. Hehe. Anyway I loved it. I'm still hanging off a cliff waiting for you to update Once Upon A Snowstorm. You're a great writer. Hmmm I wonder if theres anything else to 'inspire' you with so that you can write more M/K fics... Muahaha. Cough. I think you get the point. Hopefully you update OUAS soon. Lady A
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you got MY heart to racing! Nicely done - might be interesting to see a follow-up to this one!
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That's all I can say right now. This story made me blush harder than the one with Sessy strip teasing. Keep it up...um, not like that.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story!! I was cracking up when I read the title and the story itself had me laughing even harder!! I'm definitely going to be reading this one over and over again!! Haha I bet Kagome had never been so happy being wrong before! lol! Keep writing!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Horridporrid On: July 19, 2004 13:11 CDT
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So, when the idea was first floated on the MnM group I thought, "What a dumb idea." But then you go and prove me wrong, wrong, wrong. Yay you! What perfectly wonderful smut! I think you should tackle more cliches -- 'cause you are a goddess with them.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: KawaiiChica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just amazing! I totally loved it (I'm such a perv - that's ok I'm one of Lady A's hornyims godesses I'm allowed) This was one of the best one-shots I've read in a while. I'm still amazed - gotta go read it again ^_^
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Reviewed By: PoIsOnEfFeCtS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 02:54 CDT
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You are a brilliant, brilliant Perv. And for that... I love you. ^^ Yes I AM female and YES you do know me. ::Sigh:: -Raven
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Title: WOW!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: July 19, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totaly and absolutly hot ::fanns self:: i do hope you start a miroku/kagome fic for real i think you would do the monk a favor grade A+++++ fic
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Reviewed By: Wandering Houshi Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have to win something for this, u evil, horrible, beautiful girl. Because Free Yayo said so. and so did Megami-sama. i talked to her :-)
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Title: Merciful Sky
Reviewed By: Merciful Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write such great lemons, and this story was so cute, but now I have that stupid Bounty jigle in my head. What an interesting commercial that would be if it really was the quicker pecker-upper!o.0
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Reviewed By: Xena On: July 18, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am pretty sure that Miroku is 19 or somewhere around that age. It is canon that Kagome was 15 when the show started. I liked this story. After I'm done typing this I'm going to read it for the second time today. I'm the one that came up with the idea of giving Viagra to Miroku.
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: July 18, 2004 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, that was yummy! I love the idea about the little blue pill. Very well written. Keep up the good work ^___^
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Reviewed By: Behemoth_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I'm not sure if I've read a fic like that before.....but then again, I mostly read fics by Drof or DeathLady.....Anyways.....how old is Miroku? twenty-seven? Thirty? A twenty-seven to Thirty year old monk and an eighteen or nineteen year old teenager?? OOOkay......
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Reviewed By: Kyouri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, Quickening! I didn't know who to feel sorry for, Miroku (because of his agony) or that poor dejected serving girl. I have absolutely no sympathy for Kagome because I would have played the same trick on him, but Karma came back and bit her in the butt. Good job! Oh, and about Sango's whereabouts? Who cares? It's not about her anyway. ~ Jade
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