| "The Quicker Pecker-Upper" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: Sessh's Lover
Reviewed By: Dee Dee On: September 28, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your style of writing. I personnaly didn't find any grammar mistake. as far as creativity goes, I give you an hundred. This story was one of the best story i haave ever read and i have a blast reading. I thank you for writting it. Keep up the good work. Sesshy's lover
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Reviewed By: Sesshy's lover On: September 28, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your style of writing. I personnaly didn't find any grammar mistake. as far as creativity goes, I give you an hundred. This story was one of the best story i haave ever read and i have a blast reading. I thank you for writting it. Keep up the good work. Sesshy's lover
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Title: The Quicker- pecker- upper
Reviewed By: InuNaiomi On: August 12, 2004 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, amazing fantastick! hillariously wrong. you really should riht a book on the stuff. we'll call it The idiots guide to Kama Sutra. weird i picked that but, it seems to fit into your line of funny wrongness. im proud to be 1 of your readers. please start writing on ff.net again. its been ages since you last wrote. Selfish was good though.
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
HA! i love the title. as soon as i saw it i busted out laughing so of course i had to read it. i'll never be able to look at a bounty ad again!
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Reviewed By: puffin On: July 26, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one. For a one-short it was great. I really can't wait to read more stories or one-shorts from you. Keep it up. You are very good at it.
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Title: Finally got around to it...
Reviewed By: Lady A On: July 22, 2004 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I finnaly had the time to write you a review. Which you by the way really deserve. You're great. Sorry if I offended you with the will you marry me thing. I joke around like that. It's my way of saying you're too good. Hehe. Anyway I loved it. I'm still hanging off a cliff waiting for you to update Once Upon A Snowstorm. You're a great writer. Hmmm I wonder if theres anything else to 'inspire' you with so that you can write more M/K fics... Muahaha. Cough. I think you get the point. Hopefully you update OUAS soon. Lady A
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you got MY heart to racing! Nicely done - might be interesting to see a follow-up to this one!
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That's all I can say right now. This story made me blush harder than the one with Sessy strip teasing. Keep it up...um, not like that.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story!! I was cracking up when I read the title and the story itself had me laughing even harder!! I'm definitely going to be reading this one over and over again!! Haha I bet Kagome had never been so happy being wrong before! lol! Keep writing!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Horridporrid On: July 19, 2004 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, when the idea was first floated on the MnM group I thought, "What a dumb idea." But then you go and prove me wrong, wrong, wrong. Yay you! What perfectly wonderful smut! I think you should tackle more cliches -- 'cause you are a goddess with them.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: KawaiiChica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just amazing! I totally loved it (I'm such a perv - that's ok I'm one of Lady A's hornyims godesses I'm allowed) This was one of the best one-shots I've read in a while. I'm still amazed - gotta go read it again ^_^
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Reviewed By: PoIsOnEfFeCtS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 02:54 CDT
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You are a brilliant, brilliant Perv. And for that... I love you. ^^ Yes I AM female and YES you do know me. ::Sigh:: -Raven
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Title: WOW!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: July 19, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totaly and absolutly hot ::fanns self:: i do hope you start a miroku/kagome fic for real i think you would do the monk a favor grade A+++++ fic
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Reviewed By: Wandering Houshi Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have to win something for this, u evil, horrible, beautiful girl. Because Free Yayo said so. and so did Megami-sama. i talked to her :-)
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Title: Merciful Sky
Reviewed By: Merciful Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write such great lemons, and this story was so cute, but now I have that stupid Bounty jigle in my head. What an interesting commercial that would be if it really was the quicker pecker-upper!o.0
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